Reviews for Fool For Love
MoonFire1024 chapter 3 . 1/20/2015
that was great! although if you wrote another piece about them telling thorin and dis. and with thorin and dis having already known and being all cool about but telling the boys to keep it down, now that would be funny.
Thebunnylordofdoom chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
Boy these two boys sure do love kissing don't they ;)
I now have this montage in my head to them trying to be secretive about their relationship but also kissing everywhere and pissing everyone off. In the forges, on the training grounds, in the kitchen. Hahaha brilliant!
Now to the serious stuff...
This was AMAZING :) haha had you there!
I loved it, it was cute, funny, tantalizingly sexy and written excellently. It was interesting to read and take note of how you bled the brothers points of view into each other and kept the flow of the piece going. Also it had Kili bottom so I was even more happy ;) I don't mind them reversing but I just think he's more... well as you said a cuddly and fluffy animal so he needs the loving :D
Anyway, excellent story I really enjoyed reading it :)
Vouge chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
God that was surly one of the best lemon Scenes I every red.
Please write more.
Kneels4Loki chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
I loved the last chapter! So hot and well written and I loved the sucking on fingers thing. You don't see that a lot and it's awesome!
Jei Xi chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
Loved it! It was simply amazing :)
ChaosWithImagination chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
This was really well done. cool work.
KiiTa K chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
I truly loved it, it was amazing :3
You're talented !
liliaedsvera chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
Next chapter please
Kneels4Loki chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
Nice story! And very hot, now who's a cocktease? :p
IShipItAllAndThenSome chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
More, please!