|Reviews for Gravity|
| Mellovesall chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
This was so beautiful. Thank you.
| Yazzy x chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Oh oh oh gooooood story!
| AlannasTara chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
I love this. So sweet and touching and just beautiful and gorgeous! So in character for both of them. Wonderful!
| deniselynne1966 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
This was so dbeautiful. The way their first time making love should be. Thank you. Both have experience but are virtually virgins to LOVEmaking3
| annibelle chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
omg this was PERFECT! Soooo in-character and HOT! :)
| missmetric chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Oh wow. Echoing everyone else in saying that this sounds really plausible and felt really natural. The hesitations and the little quirks of it were very them.
| Marie King chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Whoa that was brilliant!
You wrote both characters amazingly well I really hope that their first time happens exactly like that in the show!
Keep writing you are insanely good at it!
| Haitus80 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Holy shit! This was genius, my friend! I loved it. Utter perfection! It's when I find stories like this that I get pissed off that I don't have more time to read! Every word was brilliant. Thank you for sharing )
| TheRealSonia chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
This is so perfectly Carol and Daryl.
| ja8ne.will chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Sweet, hot, tender, gorgeous story. Good God, it's hot in here! *fans self*
| BanannaFlvdSnow chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Loved it! :D
| Ravenesque2 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
| BigT1587 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Yeah,that was just about right. It was almost exactly how I pictures that there first time would be. You did a really good job in keeping them both in character and the flow of the story went really well. There were a couple of "What If "moments at the beginning;but you sailed though them nicely. Favorited
| Frost1610 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Holy hell. Forget a cold shower, I'm pretty sure I need an ice bath after that one. Fantastic. Please do this again soon!