|Reviews for Death is a good thing|
| The Raider chapter 7 . 3/26/2013
More W/T cuteness :D :D :D Anya's comments seemed pretty much spot on as well
| The Raider chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
Awwww, such Willow/Tara cuteness :D I can totally understand them fighting at the beginning, considering that it makes a certain degree of sense
| The Raider chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
So, Tara's alright. That's a big relief, considering that things could have been a lot worse. I can totally understand Willow's guilt over Oz, considering that she did have an indirect hand in his death.
| The Raider chapter 4 . 3/23/2013
Great chapter! :D
So, Rack just decides to take the choice away from Willow. Seems like something he would do, considering what we saw of his character on the show. I just hope Tara's ok (I like Oz, but if it comes down to it, Tara's the way I'm going)
Looking forward to the next update :)
| The Raider chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
Again, I think more detail would really help out here. I can totally imagine Willow being terrified of Rak being here, despite the fact that she killed him during Season 6. And more detail on how she's feeling and such would be really effective in letting the reader get a more vivid picture of it.
I'm really interested in seeing an update on this :)
| The Raider chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
Things are getting more interesting...
Again, I'm still kinda confused. My advice would be to make the chapters longer, give the scenes more detail and all that. If we had more to go on, we would know exactly what was going on. Not saying that there's anything wrong with your writing, just longer chapters are much more fun to read ;)
| The Raider chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I"m kinda confused as to what's happening, so maybe you can clairfy it for me. I'm going to guess that this is an AU where Tara possibly did get shot, but didn't die? If not, I guess that Willow is seeing Tara because she's sick, and this is henceforth a dream.
Looking forward to reading more
| Muffyn1 chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
I'm interested in this story so far. Really, really confused, but interested.
It's either moving too fast or it's supposed to be, but at the moment, I can't tell which. If this whole thing so far's supposed to seem surreal and confusing so that everything can make sense later, kudos because you're doing a wonderful job!
If it's not supposed to be going so fast, I would suggest taking a moment to describe things. Like, that van ride to the "demon specialist psychiatrist" guy was probably pretty terrifying, Knowing Willow's thoughts during it would probably help to slow the pace of that scene and make the shock of it being Rack a little more, y'know, shocking, since the reader would have some time to wonder.
Also, at first I wasn't entirely sure if this was an AU fic where Tara never died, or if Willow was just seeing her as, like, a ghost or something. Now that Dawn see's her, too, I'm thinking AU again. You should probably clear that up at the beginning. And, also, how would the whole thing have gone down if Tara was never shot? Because, if Tara was never shot, Willow would have never turned evil and would have never gone to England, and therefore would never feel like she "didn't want to see" her friends and would never have accidentally cast that spell to make her invisible to them and vice-versa, and would therefore not be fighting the Gnarl demon alone and the demon wouldn't have had a chance to eat most of the skin that he did because Buffy would have beat him up.
So, an explanation of how that battle went down would be nice, but it isn't unnecessary. I like this story and a lot and cannot wait to see where it goes. Please continue to update! (: