Reviews for Scars
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 1/26
Poor Luffy
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 2/17/2016
poor luffy
xxXxx chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Mon Esprit Libre chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
you asshole
i was crying because of stuff and this just went and made me cry more and just ugh ;-;
also your author's note made me cry too ;-;
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Im never gonna get over Aces death. Ever. Its just ine if those characters that even though Oda didnt show a lot it leaves a big impact. Specially to those who loved him instantly. Good work.
Bluebird42 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This is sad yet strangely appropriate, in a weird sort of way. I hate that Oda killed off Ace but (and it breaks my heart to say this, no really, I can hear it cracking) it was necessary for Luffy's character development. The pain won't go away completely, but it will get better, even just a little bit. I feel like a fortune cookie.
Cyborgnetics chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
It was to sad enough. I hate being reminded over and over of my favorite characters death...Especially for a few of them. Main Ace, Itachi... Zack (i thought i would never get through that) Minato (technically sealed), Sirius (why just Why)... I got to stop having favorites...

Even its just a small one-shot i love your work... And I totally agree Ace should have his own series... With Divide Sabo seriously got to love him.
RenwolfChan chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Beautiful, wonderful and awesome. Good work.
Frost Glaive chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
No, didnt make me cry. I guess I should be glad...ish. If it was moving, I would have cried, and that means it would been so good I loved it. Meh. SAAAD. why is it so many fanfics are based on this particular veeeeeery touchy subject? I will cry...
13-BlackCat-2020 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Sorry about your mother. This story is good! I love all your stories specially divided. I hope you write more stories! :D
Son Goshen chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
... Yeah... I can feel Luffy alright... happened to me plenty before until I mostly got over it. I think the length is perfect here, because any longer that.. impact, I would call it, would lessen and it just isn't so emotional as this. It was really worth it to read this, even as sad as it is.

._. On a day like this, try to read happy things. And I love veggie fried rice! There's nothing wrong with it... or is there?!
redmustarddd chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Your story was great, and you captured Luffy's point of view well. I hope you and a certain someone aren't angry for long :P thanks for the story
azab chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
i loved it a lot and you made me cry :(
LinaFair chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I think the length of it is good.
In my opinion all necessary things are said and more words would destroy the atmosphere the text makes..
And again I cry because of your storys x'D
I hope Lu can someday go one with Ace's death.. it will always be hard.. I can understand why he wish its just a dream..
And again I don't know how to write what I want to say .

And I'm sorry for the loss of your mother ._.
trisha23flow chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Okay, I cried again. Remembering Ace's final words makes me really emotional. I was kinda sad that it was your mother's death anniversary. I still don't know what it feels to lost a mother but just thinking about it makes me depressed and I feel like I'm going crazy. Anyway, I really love your stories, this one is also good. All of your stories are superb!
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