Reviews for Scars
StarliteOracle chapter 1 . 2/17
poor luffy
xxXxx chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Mon Esprit Libre chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
you asshole
i was crying because of stuff and this just went and made me cry more and just ugh ;-;
also your author's note made me cry too ;-;
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Im never gonna get over Aces death. Ever. Its just ine if those characters that even though Oda didnt show a lot it leaves a big impact. Specially to those who loved him instantly. Good work.
Bluebird42 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This is sad yet strangely appropriate, in a weird sort of way. I hate that Oda killed off Ace but (and it breaks my heart to say this, no really, I can hear it cracking) it was necessary for Luffy's character development. The pain won't go away completely, but it will get better, even just a little bit. I feel like a fortune cookie.
Cyborgnetics chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
It was to sad enough. I hate being reminded over and over of my favorite characters death...Especially for a few of them. Main Ace, Itachi... Zack (i thought i would never get through that) Minato (technically sealed), Sirius (why just Why)... I got to stop having favorites...

Even its just a small one-shot i love your work... And I totally agree Ace should have his own series... With Divide Sabo seriously got to love him.
RenwolfChan chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Beautiful, wonderful and awesome. Good work.
Frost Glaive chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
No, didnt make me cry. I guess I should be glad...ish. If it was moving, I would have cried, and that means it would been so good I loved it. Meh. SAAAD. why is it so many fanfics are based on this particular veeeeeery touchy subject? I will cry...
13-BlackCat-2020 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Sorry about your mother. This story is good! I love all your stories specially divided. I hope you write more stories! :D
Son Goshen chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
... Yeah... I can feel Luffy alright... happened to me plenty before until I mostly got over it. I think the length is perfect here, because any longer that.. impact, I would call it, would lessen and it just isn't so emotional as this. It was really worth it to read this, even as sad as it is.

._. On a day like this, try to read happy things. And I love veggie fried rice! There's nothing wrong with it... or is there?!
redmustarddd chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Your story was great, and you captured Luffy's point of view well. I hope you and a certain someone aren't angry for long :P thanks for the story
azab chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
i loved it a lot and you made me cry :(
LinaFair chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I think the length of it is good.
In my opinion all necessary things are said and more words would destroy the atmosphere the text makes..
And again I cry because of your storys x'D
I hope Lu can someday go one with Ace's death.. it will always be hard.. I can understand why he wish its just a dream..
And again I don't know how to write what I want to say .

And I'm sorry for the loss of your mother ._.
trisha23flow chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Okay, I cried again. Remembering Ace's final words makes me really emotional. I was kinda sad that it was your mother's death anniversary. I still don't know what it feels to lost a mother but just thinking about it makes me depressed and I feel like I'm going crazy. Anyway, I really love your stories, this one is also good. All of your stories are superb!
spoons-are-evil chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Well, I suppose normally someone would say "I'm sorry for your loss," and I really am sorry, but I sadly can't offer more comfort. I've never lost anyone, so I don't know how it feels, and I can't even begin to try to understand.

This fanfic was so sad! I almost cried! And it doesn't help that it's nighttime. I'm always so much more sentimental in the dark. -_- I feel so bad for Luffy, being plagued with nightmares. He lost both of his brothers (still can't believe Oda killed Sabo)... wah, poor Luffy! I wonder if the crew ever noticed his dreams. Hmm, I also wonder if Luffy has dreams like this in canon. He seems to have moved past Ace's death really well, but it's possible that he's just hiding his pain... gah, now I'm all depressed! I need to go watch/ read something silly and stupid now. Maybe I'll go eat a cookie... okay sorry, getting sidetracked. Anyways, I loved the story (even if it did almost make me cry), it was short, sweet (in a way), and to the point, and really well written.
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