|Reviews for Jack and the Wind|
| qdon chapter 2 . 1/24
I enjoyed this fic really lightens the mood
| jrarulez chapter 2 . 1/15
will you make a story where jack teaches them how to do this?
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/3
Oh please continue it would be a great story
| Tarienlover chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
This was such a good story! I loved how you made the sand and wind able to talk, it was a very good idea. Definitely going to favorite it!
| Bbauthor2 chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
You should do a third chapter about when Jack goes to meet Fall, and the Wind just HAS to accompany him there. Pretty pretty please with Jack Frost on top?
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
put mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre chappppppters pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaasssssseeee im 11 years old pwease
pleeeeaaase pleeeaase pleeease
| HollyKalina23 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I really like this story. I'm glad you made it into a two shot but is there any chance of a third part coming up? I'd really like to read about how Jack interacts with Fall when they meet up. Please, if you can, add a chapter with that in it. Pretty please?
| Spere chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I really love this story, honestly, one of my favorites! The portrayal of the wind is perfect, and so are all of the other characters
| golden dragon chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This is way cool but I am goning to kill the spirits fo what thay did
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Just btw Jack isn't British(he's American), therefore he wouldn't say mum. He'd say mom.
| Make war not love. war is fun chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
cool story tho I wish u tell us what happen to the autum spirits, even tho im an autum child I love winter and snow and frost
| InvisibleGeek chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
Oh how I wish for you to continue! This was inspirational! It was beautiful! I loved it so much. It's hard for me to express the love I have for your story.
| Jarjaxle chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
YEY! Next Chapter! Absolutely love it! Nice to see Good Story to be Updated!
hahaha...Those Autumn Spirits get what they deserve! XD King is Pissed
And Sand is Love with Wind? X) That could be idea for many intersting things
| Potter4me chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Awwwww I loved this story! It was so cute it gave me warm fuzzies everywhere. I liked the idea of jack being able to talk to the wind and the sands and teaching it to the others. And grrrr bad fall spirits bad. But fall was cool. Sorta reminded me of the mad hatter from alice in wonderland ;) well good job. Write on dude!
| mysticmoon1331 chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
very enjoyable story :) i really like the concept of jack understanding the wind and the sand being similar. i also thought it was believable that some autumn spirits weren't please with jack's work. thanks for this awesome story. if ever you write more in this verse, i will happily read it. :)