Reviews for Jack and the Wind
Kyd wykkyd chapter 2 . 4/15
Good! I like how you took the wind and the sand and gave them a personality!
freakybubbletea chapter 2 . 4/12
The ending was satisfying! Glad to know those autumn spirits got what they deserved, despite sadly not as much kickbutt action from North and Bunnymund.. but it was good! Jack's wind is awesome. I like the idea of Jack teaching the others to understand Sandy's dreamsand.. lovely two chapters all in all - I found it quite enjoyable.
freakybubbletea chapter 1 . 4/12
This is beautifully amazing and I'm questioning why I hadn't discovered this fic sooner. Stories about Jack's relationship with the wind are just wonderful and there really need to be more in the fandom these days... This is just.. amazing - how you described Wind's relationship with Jack and the language of her and the nightmare/dreamsands. Pretty creative, I'll say. I seriously loved this story.
Zyenna chapter 2 . 3/30
This is really sweet. I would love to see how Jack reacts to meeting the Fall King.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/25
This is really well written. I loved it!
It would be really good as a full story
jessLpfy chapter 2 . 2/7
This was very enjoyable, thanks for the write! In the first chapter I notice you did not mention jack's hoodie was taken off or at least the arm rolled up for wind to warp his arm up in bandage. I love what you did for wind and fall's characters they were great, I could really picture them the way you wrote them. Thanks again.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/29
Lotusflowerbloom2000 chapter 2 . 11/15/2014
Please write a third chapter I loved this fanfiction and really think it should be continued please xxxx
Niker chapter 2 . 10/8/2014
Wasn't there a scence in the movie where a nightmare told Pitch that Jack and the Guardians were collecting the teeth, and he understood it? So technically, Pitch can understand Nightmare Sand. Nightmare Sand was just in a horse form during that scence.
wittyusernames chapter 2 . 9/29/2014
Pleaasseee keep it up love reading your woorrkkkkk lovvvee iiiiitttt
Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2014
Oh My God! This is a really good story, I would love to read more of your work! Thank you so much!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/14/2014
That would have made a GREAT series

Maybe you could re-start it
ColorsAndWords chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
is it just a unanimouse disition that Jack gets dreams of dolphins from the dream sand?
Aliahthewolfgirl chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Instead of 'Jack and the Wind' you could call it, "Just a Breeze" Not a very good title, but I wanted to know what you think (If you want to reply you can go to my Wattpad account, it's the same user )
qdon chapter 2 . 1/24/2014
I enjoyed this fic really lightens the mood
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