|Reviews for The Hunter and The Hunted|
| caligo-lux chapter 1 . 3/9
...well...it was...something? Sorry i just couldnt take it seriously...the thought of javert singing (or at least rhyming) and randomly crying to the sky is just a tat to funny for that XD
the rest of the story was alright...it conveyed what it was supposed to and was well paced
| Artsistra chapter 1 . 3/6
I was tearing up when Valjean acted like he never met Javert before. *wipes eyes* Feels...
Victor Hugo never mentioned Javert's first name, but I agree on it being necessary (especially when a relationship is involved). In a 1935 movie, they called him Emile and in another, Etienne. I don't really like these names, but I prefer Emile, even though it sounds a bit too sweet in comparison to his last name. I think he'd have a name with a "r" in it or rather hard sounds. Louis is good for me though, but it's hard to put a first name other than "Inspector" on Javert. xD
Anyways, I really loved this story and the fluff is always welcome !
| TotaltotheMax chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I thought Javert was pretty good actually. Valvert is a good ship actually. I like it.
| MoonyDanny chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Don't be so harsh on yourself! Javert is a very difficult character to write, and while yours is a bit ooc, the story was very sweet :)
| maddiethealchemist chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I LOVED THIS. PLEASE WRITE MORE!
| Alexa Hiwatari chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I like it, the conflict of what they lived is what makes them surrender I think that is what you captured its just that you couldnt venture for more but I think you did it well.
You put the main points the wants that makes them diferent and the ones that attach them, so the main point of their relationship is that wether is right or wrong or law or the feeling of beiing hunted they always think about each other so thats why they know what the other think if not everything a lot... because they are lake day and night so they complete each other. Thats why I like them to be tgether because they dont ned to hide what they are or what they like they dont try to impress each other they now for real who the other is.
| Jeanne chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I thought it was lovely! Very simple and sweet.
| Lisle987 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I'm trying so hard not to 'SQUEEE' right now. BUT IT'S JUST SO CUTE.
You did a great job, especially for someone who doesn't even support JavertxValjean. XD