Reviews for Embers
hrm2001 chapter 23 . 8/15/2013
great ending
Guest chapter 24 . 7/27/2013
TributeAndProud chapter 24 . 7/27/2013
LOVED IT! What a great ending!
ForFutureReference chapter 24 . 7/24/2013
Very nice job you did here.
You portrayed Melodie as a nicely complex character with a well rounded set of flaws, virtues, unreliable narration, and a realistic connection to her grandfather. Every canon character was in-character and treated with respect (except Coin, who's a *****).
This version of the Games made sense (and was appropriately dehumanizing), and the reasoning for it continuing was believable. Just as believable is the idea that Coin had no intention of there only being one last Games.
I take it that Patria is based off the UK or EU.
And in the end you tied things up very nicely and didn't rush things.
I especially like how you purposely made it ambiguous as to whether Elias is a hallucination or something more; it either case, he's sure benign. Not sure if it was intentional symbolism or not, but I did notice that the two helpful guys in the arena were named after prophets.

In any case: again, nice work.
geegeejo98 chapter 24 . 7/24/2013
Seriously the best thing I have read for a while. You ended it all beautifully. Tied up every loose end, and left no annoying cliff hangers. So great. I like cant even - just yes.
Thank you for putting in the time, passion, and clear effort of this series. Beautiful.
- Be Extraordinary :)
mozie chapter 23 . 7/24/2013
brilliant i'm so so so so sad that it's over! please write something else you are a brilliant author. xxx
mozie chapter 21 . 7/23/2013
fantastic i can almost imagine all of this happening as a sequal to the actual books xxx
geegeejo98 chapter 19 . 7/20/2013
NOOO! I don't want it to be over! Such a great story. Great job!
geegeejo98 chapter 7 . 7/19/2013
Oh my.. I am in Hunger Games heaven right now! Love your writing! Very excited to keep reading! I love that you take your time in writing. So many people rush and it makes the story allot less interesting when all of the events are sitting on top of each other. You have a great flow with your story and it is a very well written extension of the original. You are extremely talented! Thanks for writing this!
- Be Extraordinary :)
TributeAndProud chapter 19 . 7/18/2013
This is a sweet chapter.
mozie chapter 18 . 7/18/2013
this is really good! xxx
TributeAndProud chapter 17 . 7/15/2013
Wow, didn't see that coming! Can't wait for more!
hrm2001 chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
nice are u going to keep going
Madi189 chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
So because I am obsessed with reading FanFics, I was just scrolling through Hunger Games Fics, when I came across yours. I was going to pass it, but I just had to click it.
So I Did.
And you know what?
I loved it... And I want you to update it right now.
Don't stop...
And The Cliffhangers kill me...
Just so you know...
Taylor2324 chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
Love your story! Keep writing!
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