|Reviews for Tainted Sugar|
| purpledragon6 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Marceline being Bonnibel's mother figure and that's why she means so much to her. Also that would make sense as to why the smell of the T-shirt was so comforting to her.
This story is utterly brilliant.
| Ashley chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Can u plllllz post the original darker story?
| Skyfeather of RiverClan chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
| KittyComeHere chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
this is cool
| GJxx chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Are you gonna write anothe chapter about bonnible's life with marcy right
| somerandomloser12231321 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I enjoyed it. What if you wrote the darker version as a separate story or an extra chapter, like a bonus?
You really pulled off good character interaction this time, and the backstory was interesting writing, especially her dialogue.
| GamerFTW chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This was really good. I'm curious about the original version though. And what happened next. :)