Reviews for Tainted Sugar
purpledragon6 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Marceline being Bonnibel's mother figure and that's why she means so much to her. Also that would make sense as to why the smell of the T-shirt was so comforting to her.

This story is utterly brilliant.
Ashley chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Can u plllllz post the original darker story?
Skyfeather of RiverClan chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
KittyComeHere chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
this is cool
DJ.GRIFFIN.2000 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Are you gonna write anothe chapter about bonnible's life with marcy right
somerandomloser12231321 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I enjoyed it. What if you wrote the darker version as a separate story or an extra chapter, like a bonus?

You really pulled off good character interaction this time, and the backstory was interesting writing, especially her dialogue.
GamerFTW chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This was really good. I'm curious about the original version though. And what happened next. :)