Reviews for Pertinacious Wills
Guest chapter 10 . 8/25/2014
What a cliffhanger! What will happen next? OMG you can't make us wait any longer!
KristinHigg96 chapter 10 . 8/20/2014
It's been 5 months, so are you going to update this? It's a wonderful story, and it would be a shame for you to not finish it. Your characterizations of the Fae are wonderful, and your ideas for the AU are marvelous. Please update, especially since you left us at such a place. Thanks.
MeridithGelmetti chapter 10 . 8/17/2014
Oh, how wonderful this is! I've never been so enthralled with a story. Your tone, characterization, and eloquence are nothing short of genius! So happy to have stumbled upon the story, and thankful that you've resumed writing it again. All my best!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/9/2014
Wow this story is great! I noticed that your story hasn't been updated in more than 4 months *hint hint* I'm only kidding, take your time to make this story even better but not to long! So update as soon as you can, thank you for writing this story and I hope you don't give up on it.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/4/2014
I check once a month to see if there has been upset and I know it has only been 4 months but I would love to read another chapter soon :)
Saphira113 chapter 10 . 7/28/2014
It has only been four months but I would desperately love for you to post the next chapter and to finish this story.

This story is fantastic. This AU is wonderful and imaginative and I seriously hope you can continue it. Thor is a wonderful fandom but please please don't forget about Labyrinth.

Why do I get the feeling that Halsey was the one who tore up the wedding dress, not Toby? And I feel that Sarah should have listened to Edmund better when he said that the Fae spend so long with themselves that both their dark and light sides are fully developed. Based on that it would stand to reason that the most outwardly light Fae, Halsey, is the most inwardly dark.

Also, Sarah desperately needs to talk to her father, hopefully after this scene she will.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/27/2014
Just read your story,. Halsey is so creepy! I want ti thank you for posting a regency story, there is not enough of those! Update soon xxx
Shadow131 chapter 7 . 7/26/2014
Team Edmund/Elizabeth for evar! Also, holy crap, Halsey becomes spookier by the chapter, I really want to know what's up!
Shadow131 chapter 6 . 7/26/2014
Oh Jareth. Obvious declaration of love is obvious to everyone BUT Sarah. What a great, spooky chapter - though I suspect I know what it means. One thing I have yet to figure out is Halsey, so I'm interested to see how THAT plays out.
Shadow131 chapter 2 . 7/26/2014
I immediately started chanting "Edmund/Elizabeth, Edmund/Elizabeth!" Get the sweet cousin a happy ending! Edmund is a ridiculous flirt and I love him already.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/26/2014
Next chapter please! xx
Shadow131 chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
A big thank you for making a Regency AU that isn't physically set in the U.K. Real locations tend to yank me out of my suspension of disbelief, as I like timeless locations with passing familiarity with real-world times and places far more. And they're so much more fun to explore!
I also really wouldn't worry if it takes you a while to finish. Most people are very realistic about that, though I do hope you're able to continue.
The allusions to Pride and Prejudice and all things Austen are obvious, but not bad. They actually make me smile a bit. It's good world building.
Also, I actually quite like the surname you gave Jareth's family. It suits him.
I love that the Fae are still so very much themselves: "Pretty girl? Yup, that's mine now." The variety of rules you weave in is absolutely enchanting.
Usually this isn't the sort of story I'd like, but you write it with such heart and it's so damn charming I can't help but enjoy it and grin the whole way through.
veronicaselene chapter 10 . 7/25/2014
Ahhhhhhh! FINALLY A KISS BUT ROBERT, NOOOOOOOO, COME BACK LATER! I went to click for the next chapter and inadvertently yelled "No!" out loud... I surprised myself at the outburst as well as scaring my poor puppy curled up in my lap half to death, ha! I was a bit more caught up in the story than I realized! I do hope you update soon! This is without a doubt an EXCELLENT story and I can't get enough. I surely hope it won't be 8 months until the next update! Don't make me get your mother after you ;)

P.S. I love your OC's! They feel just as real as Jareth and Sarah... I so love your Jareth and Sarah as well! Let's be honest, there's nothing about this story I don't love (now that Toby has gotten his little behind in line, lol)!
veronicaselene chapter 4 . 7/24/2014
Good heavens, this story is oh, so captivating! I do so hope you're still updating it when you can! It's been quite some time since a story made me so smile so much! At 27, it's been a long time since I felt giddy like a little school girl! I absolutely adore this AU. I'm trying my best to drag the chapters out so that I can slowly enjoy it, but I cannot seem to stop devouring it! I am soooo glad you reposted and that I have found it! Thank you!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
Oh dear, they got caught. I wonder how Robert will act! Update soon, I'm looking forward to what will happen .
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