Reviews for Grandpa
scorpio723 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I remember reading this story way back when you were on here before your hiatus. It's a great story not just because of the psychology and the foreknowledge, but it works as a great mystery. You seem to like the kind of stories where everything you need to understand the story is there, but you need to read it again and go "Oh so that's what that was."

Case in point, the drawings in this story, they're the kind of things that are a little weird until you realize that Jane is drawing the Autobots. Afterwards, it all comes together: " jacket, blue jeans, blue hat and that grey beard...waitaminnit that's Optimus Prime!" That kind of thing.
JenEvan chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Interesting. Liked the part where they try to psychoanalyze the kid; things that seem so obviously clear to us readers (becoz we know) yet remains a bunch of confusion to the characters in the story becoz they don't know.