Reviews for Wonderland
SomexXxDay chapter 7 . 1/6/2014
I am usually not a fan of Harry/Cho pairing but I have to say this one-shot was quite the ecstatic surprise ;) I like the unique ideas that you have come up with in this chapter as well as the previous chapters posted, a variety of parings too ;) I hope to read even more in the NEAR future :P
Guest chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
Lol, harry kisses hermione and shes like
Wat r u doing
And hes like
Im kissing my girl friend
And shes like
Guest chapter 6 . 6/17/2013
Another good chapter. I love that this story combine the different ideas that you have whether it's like Chapter 1 and 2 that has a thousand years of pureblood traditions and practices or chapter 5 which is in an au or chapter 4 and 6 which is set in the original universe but with different pairing(not sure whether chap 3 is au or just canon with different pairing). As for the story, I think you should keep it as Harry/somebody since the second chapter wasn't as popular as the other chapters. Can't wait for the next chapter.
gonekrazy3000 chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
This was nice :) Really liked the interactions and descriptions throughout the one-shot.
You write the two of them really well. I hope to see more Harmony stories for you :D
happylady chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
Wonderful oneshot I do love a happy Harry:)
Until next time
happylady chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I thought this was a Harry/Hermione story!
loki0191 chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This story seems to be nothing more than a rip-off of Ell Roche's Chancing Chaos. If you were inspired b that fic then please give credit where it's due.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/3/2013
Love your story. I hope you do Harry/Fleur cause that one of my favourite pairings.
ravens.sword chapter 5 . 6/3/2013
I loved all of the one-shots, but I especially enjoyed this last one. I think it would make an amazing story.
LuxEterna1 chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
not bad
i cant wait to see more
DragonWolf82 chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
I really like that forth chapter. All too often authors don't realise that Harry is still human and has had virtually nothing but heartache happen in his life.
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
Nice bit of tension and release. Thanks for sharing!
Sedure.Maikeru chapter 4 . 5/9/2013
Sorry I skipped over the dramione. This was the best of the four. I like a good honks. Good job on the chapter. I think for a harmony, you can do a DH tent scene or the scene at the cemetery. Maybe Harry's parents get involved and get the two together somehow. Lots of harmony scenes to choose from. I would do fourth year and up though.
tonksfan94 chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
Wow, that one is a really great chapter; this one deserves a full length fic and that is not all because I ship Harry/Tonks!

You portrayed extremely well how Tonks would be feeling after constant rejections and excuses; loved to see Harry coming into his own and for once, not being the strong one, or the one noble person who lets go to help others get the same.

again, a great chapter. Kudos!
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
This was very well written, of the four this one deserves to become a full length fic, have it start from the first time they meet. One thing that was a little annoying, you portrayed her as his only confidant, Hermione deserves her due, I don't acknowledge HBP, so in my eyes she will always he his closest friend and confidant, whoever is with Harry just has to that.
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