|Reviews for The Journal|
| Elphaba'sGirl chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Oh. Ashur understands the importance of the journal. Wonderfully done.
| Zelda rules chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
That was great!
40 weeks was a great story and I would really like to read about Ashur's childhood.
| princess of the negaverse chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I really liked this! I wish you could have delved into Ash's personality a bit more and his relationships with his family and any other outside relationships he may have, like friends or a girlfriend/boyfriend.
Also I thought Fiyero and Elphaba were a bit out of character. Not so much so that it wasn't enjoyable for the brief time we read about them, but enough for it to be noticable.
Overall a good story with a few minor problems that can be fixed as you keep writing..
Tess, Princess of the Negaverse
| ComingAndGoingByBubble chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Aw this was really great!
I loved it!
| vinkunwildflowerqueen chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Aw, thanks for writing this! I liked reading it.
| WickedBrony chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
WOW! Um, can you update? Like, now?