Surprise! I read it later. Which is now. SO you can stop being a diva and be happy cause I read it! Much much better my friend! Now you just practice and keep improving on your own style of writing! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! YAY! Now back to youtube. 3

Again another good chapter, I enjoy reading this fanfiction and hope you keep it up.

PC

Ur awesome. I wish I could write like that Pmmm. (Everyone else: We know each other on a different website)

Can cats smile? overall great story!

Good story, really enjoying it so far. I've not found many good warriors fictions but this one is really good, it is obvious that you have put some effort into making this your own and is not the generic warriors story. Thanks hope you update soon.

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