|Reviews for When the Monsters Play|
| ClosetedOtakus24 chapter 1 . 4/12
This…was…absolutely GOOD. You mean to tell me…that this was your FIRST time that you made a fan fiction of this couple? The FIRST time that you've done this? Well, I'm calling BULL S*** on that because you did a PERFECT job of doing so. I haven't read any of your other fan fics, but I REALLY hope that you went with THIS EXACT ANGLE for them, because it's the best one I've ever seen for this shipping. Keep up the good work! :)
| DokidokiMariel46 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
this...was very interesting o.o i liked it alot actually :o
| Melmel Phase chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
THIS WAS SO GREAT! So that means Iza actually loved Shizzy all those years right?! He was just playing around with him and hated him BECAUSE he loved him, right? Ugh I love this couple! Your writing style is beautiful. The way you conveyed the whole story was flawless. I absolutely adored it
| Eman chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Man I feel so bad for shizou I think the only monster here is izaya.
With his ability to toy and manipulate the felling of another and no matter howmuch damage he does it seems like he's never affected.
What's his angle? Does he do it just for kicks? Is he really a sociopath? Why mess with shizou to the extent he has why keep coming back if you hate him so much? Why cage and trap him?
Words can not be described to tell how much izaya and shizou obviously hate one another but clearly izaya started and continued it.
I just feel great pity for shizou and wish he would have been able to over come whatever evil hold izaya had on him in this fic.
Really great by the way you know a stories good when it actually makes you feel something I almost cried 3 times. This is an unfortunate love storie. I wish their was a sequel were we are able to see clearly into the mind of izaya and were shizou life starts. To get better.
I feel like shizou was just a pawn in izayas frustrations.
Please excuse the incomplete thoughts I was never really good at getting em down on paper. Eh typing.
| 1215Animefan chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Very nice story and I hope to read more from you.
| Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Nice. Would you develop the relationship even more in a sequel?
| Xitlalit123 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Wow... I can't even... Wow... :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
i really enjoyed it, (yaaay my OTP) in fact, i would love to read a continuation of this :)
| xxxIggyxFangxxx chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
jasdkfndlkfjasdlfj! luffed it!
| Lil' P 101 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Freaking awesome. You describe them perfectly.
| uihirasawa chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
ooo this is really great! i like how in character you were with shizuo uvu
| GuSiRuLi chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Perfect! A few tiiiny typos here and there, but perfect! I love when people keep these two in character while writing about them. I was a little bit afraid this would turn from extreme hate to 'absolute love', like many authors do, with that summary but I'm glad it stayed as their exclusive type of 'hate' all the way to the end. The relationship these two could have wouldn't be pretty in anyway, and definitely not very sweet.
I really liked the background story you made up too, loosely inspired on the real one and yet different, it was interesting to read and fit the developement of both of them.
Now I'm curious of how Shizuo and Izaya would continue to interact after the last scene, but I guess it's okay? Hahaha
Oh, for a minute there I thought Shizuo had woken up at Shinra's home hahah
So, yeah, I really enjoyed it, congrats on writing such a good first fic about Shizuo and Izaya. Ah! Almost forgot! I LOVED how you portrayed Izaya.
Thanks for sharing and for your hard work!