Reviews for Team Building
009 chapter 8 . 8/22
A bit of a messy ending, and the obvious plot holes with only a few in the team being included, but a nice idea.
009 chapter 3 . 8/22
WHY IS ONLY PART OF THE TEAM AROUND?!
009 chapter 2 . 8/22
Yeah. Clearly matchmaking.
009 chapter 1 . 8/22
Where are all the other double oohs? They're part of the team too!
GreenVelvetCurtains chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
You know I half thought you were going to have Q & Mallory come out as a couple too! I'm almost disappointed you didn't, haha! :P
Hope you write another soon. :)
DarkSharker chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
Great finsh I hope to more of your Bond/M soon :)
Xxxdeletr chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
OMG. All the time reading this chapter I thought "Bähm, in your face!" Because ... They are all so clever and I found it really funny. :D and it was sweet, and Q was so clever and wise. Liked it! If I am allowed, this is the next of you're stories I want to translate, but first finish the other. It was a really great story, thank you! Xxx
Rosetintstheworld chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
Aww, all sad now it's finished :( You did a fab job and you'd better keep on with Bond/M in the future or I'll bloody well kill ya. Just kidding, I could never do that :) I love the sound of loads more Bond/M in the future :) Oh, and on another note when I was looking through Casualty crossovers for inspiration for IUPG and the second I saw the Scott & Bailey tag, I literally said out loud; 'Only you...only you could write that!" :) And I read some more of The Last One To Know too :) Fabby xxx
liz1967 chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
Wow...I love it. I love how they became a Team. Great job sorry it's over but WOW...XXXXXXX
TheOtherGirlOnFire chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
Aaaahhhh! MALLORY! That bastard! How could you leave me with a cliffhanger like that? Update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
Please hurry up and write the next chapters! Great story!
Xxxdeletr chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
great chapter! I was just laughing so hard abut mallory, don't know why ... maybe he aroused my pity. :D but yeah, eve and bill are great too. liked this line: "Don't look obvious when you do it but look back at James and M." - really sweet, in a way. but, yeah. carry on! xxx
Rosetintstheworld chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
Why do I get the feeling that that last comment was aimed at me? Oh dear, I wonder what Mallory is gonna say about M and James? :-)
liz1967 chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
Well done :) couldn't have asked for a better cliffhanger. haha. wonder how they are going to explain the're way out it this one?
Xxxdeletr chapter 6 . 4/3/2013
Oh MY God!, I still didn't stop screaming noiseless (you know, pour neighbors. :D) This was actually sweet. I mean, at the beginning. Eve and Bill. they still match perfectly. He alway seems calm and down to earth, and she is sometimes a little twirly (is that the right word? you know, the oppoiste of calm and down to earth) and how they both notice, that they really like M, which seemed not that clear before. But both, Eve and Bill try to see what James sees in M. So .. I LIKE! And the second part was just so ... AWWWWW! u know?
I could imagine so well how he massages her and she just enjoys. and how he explained his loves and how careful and gently he seemed. And the end. you know? i was just sitting in my chair, reading the end and begin to scream, because it was ... so fluffy. and gnarf. I want to read the next chapters, you know? I suppose, I'm a little inpatient. but yeah ... who cares? looking forward to read the next chapters!
keep it up! xxx Mieke
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