|Reviews for Paramour|
| jarjayes chapter 1 . 9/12
This was good!
| Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Ha! XD This was cute. I'm actually starting to enjoy this pairing, oddly enough. This was a nice intro into it. Thank you.
| utau chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
oh my god i wish people would stop reviewing and saying please turn this into a story. fuck them. it IS a story, and if you actually bothered to read you'd notice it's a damn good one.
this is wonderful. you wrote anzu beautifully in-character, trying to keep her pride and show that she hasn't been wounded by her conversational partner, not one bit—except she has, and it shows when she yells back at kaiba that “isn't it obvious why i come here?” and he stops, almost turns, reevaluates his life in a few short seconds. and then he returns the next day and he's not hopelessly ooc, he's the same as always except, well, different. you let the characters show us this rather than telling us flat out about it, which is something many authors fail to do.
overall, your prose is marvelous. i have combed this archive for almost a year now in search of the handful of good azureshipping fics, and i can assure you that if i possessed an account, this would be extremely high up on the list. thank you, and please continue to write as long as you derive joy from it.
| xXxtellmewhyxXx chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I smiled the entire time I read this. So adorable. (:
| TheLadyIvanov chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
If I could say something about this one shot, that makes some justice to it, probably would be this: Brilliant.
I love it, absolutely love it. It's short yet very well thought and elaborated as well; very good story line and not getting into too much details, just enough to set the story right and to get it going on. I like the thought of them just casually meeting one time and then making it go for weeks. I had read some fanfics about them going out to dates, but, somehow, I don't see how that could happen for real, without having a proper set up, I don't know if I'm explaining myself. I constantly feel like there is a piece missing in those fanfics, but here it's perfect. None of them is asking the other to be there, they just are.
Of course Anzu would be the one leading the talks, that's her personality and she does not like the uncomfortable feeling of silence, and I can imagine that silence-Kaiba would be something rather scary as well. You were very careful to make sure he stays in character, while still showing that he does seem to have some feelings for her: Barely showing it, but the fact that he is still going there to see her, that is beyond words. It's like the famous scene of him saving her, in Battle City: He doesn't need to say anything, but the fact that he planned to save her and actually physically helped to save her, I mean, what else do you want?
Tho you don't really say if this is set post ending of the series or while the series is still on, I will take this as the first option. Love it when you mentioned that she feels guilty falling for Kaiba, you know? That's how I see this pairing going, actually. I don't know if you ship it or not, but I do like Prideshipping as well, and for some reason, I think Yami is a big piece in between this ship, Azureshipping. Anzu likes Yami, Kaiba is obsess with winning over Yami, and he could be the perfect piece to make these two get together somehow. At least in my headcannon, that is xD
The ending is just... so IC, in my perspective. I can't see Kaiba saying the words "I like you" "I love you", I just can't, even if I'm reading a fanfic in which they are already a pairing, I can't even. I do can picture him, tho, saying stuff like that, or making a comment that would implied that he does have some feelings, but don't actually saying that. And I like that she didn't say that exactly either! I always see that she puts her pride on top of her words when she is with Kaiba, like trying to be stronger than him so he doesn't crush her down, and that's something I like about these two: She has the courage to talk to him in ways other people don't, and she doesn't back down.
So perfect work making them BOTH very IC.
Sorry to bother you with a long and bizarre review, but I had to. Congratulations for this amazing piece, one of the best Azureshipping fanfics I've ever read before, and I mean it.
| Anshu chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This was intense and very well written! I loved the ending.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
This was very good, wish it turned into a story :(
| Crystia chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Hey! It wasn't totally cheesy! I was bracing myself the whole time, waiting for Kaiba to break out of character and be all like, 'I lurrrv you' but he DIDN'T! :D :D :D :D
...Sorry...But I love that last line. Dawww. He cares. In a Kaiba-ish sorta way. XD
I'm not usually an azureshipper, but hey, doesn't hurt to try something different every once in a while. And I enjoyed this, so maybe I'll read the pairing more often. You've converted me! ...Er, or at least added to my long list of likable pairings. :)
Thanks for posting!
| Mangafn chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I LOVE IT! ths is one of my fav "one shot" now ... i'm so sad howevr it is a one shot :( cant u plan a LONG sequel
the story is very sweet, nice flow of ideas. well written and described bt wz no unnecessary details, n i specially find it amazing u portrayed the characters so well... keep it up!
azureshi... fan 4ver :)))))))))))
| shopgirlNY152 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
This was really great and I wish it wasn't a one-shot
| Setnzu chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This was really enjoyable to read. Thank you for posting your story and I hope that it can turn into a story (?).