Can't wait for more.

good story so far
please continue soon!

awesome ending, update soon

Moar!

"Sir, I'm know that that's it."" - Some verb confusion here. Either "I know" or "I'm sure".

"I would never sink that low, right, Addy?"" - Please please PLEASE tell me EDI will be making an appearance in this fic somewhere.

"Shepard could see a couple turian in blue police armor " *turians

""Women?" Kaidan repeated, amused slightly." - It's an easy mistake to make. I mean, Alenko's such a pussy.

"Well, except Valern. He's kind of a dick."" - I couldn't agree more. :D

"He has a way of summing things up that I've find a mite handy before." - *found. Raynor is capable of talking correctly.

"you have the temerity to call in a bet?" " - Sparatus sounds like he'd never dealt with Aethyta before.

"The lose of life was… tragic. Millions of children, stillborn." *loss. And in the last 1400 years, you've done jack-all to remedy that mistake, Valern, so kindly STFU.

"I can fit a base an up-strength platoon out of the Normandy" - This sentence doesn't parse well. I can't tell if it's missing words, or has too many.

Its nice to see a somewhat useful Council.

Because there's nothin' like slammin' some assholes' face into a bar counter.

Excellent chapter, good to see a new one up and about :)

I will say that Rynor will likely need to start creating more colonies and very likely setting up defenses as well as a fleet. With what's out there and other races Rynor is likely going to expect he will contend with pirates or other threats so he will likely want to prep up the terran war mashine and start having his engineers start designing ships that are just shy of Dreadnaught class but pushing the boundary and using what weaponry and loop loses you can to make the most heavily armed and armored ship they can get away with so they can produce a large number of them as well as get Swan to design a large and powerful ship that they can use in Dreadnaught class that they can use since they can only use a limited number so then why not make something that would fit the name Behemoth and tell Swan to make something that fits the name. The Terrains can likely be able to construct something that big with their engineering but I think the goal of the First Dreadnaught under Citidel law would be to try to make something as close to a Protoss Carrier in size as they can.

You know I can picture the Terrans making a cruiser with enough fire power to take down small asteroids if they put their mind to it.

I do think the Quarrians would be very interested with the Terrans with their non dependance on Ezero some may try to have a pilgramig with them or even the Protoss due to their ship size (likely impossible and get turned away)

Well. I have to compliment you on the talks wih the council. Finally, a fanfic that actually makes the council pretty darned competent. Very nice touch with the talks, nothing really felt that it was pulled out of the blue, every decision had a very reasonable and logical arguement to support the decisions. Great work, and I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, will this go into a retelling of the first game or will we go off into the unknown wih new missions or a mix of both? Also, will we ever return to the Koprulu sector? So keep up the good work.
PS: I don't comment all that much, so if you don't see shy comments from me, don't be worried, I'm still around and reading. Just that I'm a bit lazy wih comments. Keep up the excellent work!

hell yeah! awesome chapter is awesome

update soon please

Well if anything if Reynor get's into a way it's likely he could gain help among the numerous other human factions. Like the Government that likely rose up from the Dominion's defeat. As well as the other billions of Terrans still in the Kopul sector and it's more likely that their are billions on billions of innocents still there. WHen Raeynor just left telling others to follow him that sort of isolated everyone who can't make the journey. Their really isn't much they can use to travel that far.

Not to mention I do think it's likely that Raynor does have enough pull in some Terran military groups to convince them to send him some fleets he is pretty much now Respected by several Terran military powers.

COnsidering the enemies Raynor has he more than likely established a large number of colonies since that few ships he had would do nothing about the likely massive number or refugees even for other areas. (I do say that it's kind of heartless saying that their isn't that much innocents there in reailty their are always innocents and since Rynor abononed the Kopul sector he was essentially their main hope for alot of the suffering people or those's who want freedom. In most ways Rynor has a lot of pull.)

You know it's more likely that Rynor will be able to access a fairly large fleet sometime. Especially if he want's to make sure he doesn't play second string to the council he's going to need access to a large fleet soon so he will likely need to gain a much larger area of control or help. He could even ask Matt's..."wife" (to Matts...oh boy he's going to be avoiding the bridge if she show's up)

I wonder when the fire bats will show up in this fight they will likely be terrifying.

SEEMS EVERY ONE HAS THERE TECH . seems now they lost the advantage .

Rory Swann: Resident badass of Sweezy's bar.