Reviews for The Poem
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
*Sniff* Why? FINISH IT!
Anne Hawthorne chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
Wow, you almost made me cry. That's why I loved this ending so much! *-* Really great, and sad, and bitter Peeta, it's wonderful. Favoriting, now sz
King Kubar chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
Well, it's touching I will say that. It hurts, and while it's short you convey that well. I will say I kind of want more. Maybe an understanding to why Katniss did it, or her realization of what she did. Something along those lines. I know it's not conducive but I can't help but feel that it's missing clarity. It could easily be Peeta overreacting to old friends hanging out like they used to. Not saying that's the case but you do leave a little to much to assumtion in it. Maybe that's the point.
TurquoiseShine chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This was cute! Katniss was a little OOC though, which I didn't mind of course because I liked Peeta's poem and how he poetically described his feelings towards her :) Very well-written.
-Andy
Anne Hawthorne chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Oh, poor Peeta :c though, I loved it. Maybe i'm a bit mean too, i love to read about Peeta and that broken heart of his. Great 3