|Reviews for Until the End of All Things|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Good one-shot story, and also good on the descriptions.
It's nice to read stories that show Frodo and Sam's friendship. You did good keeping them in-character, and I guess Sam especially. Although, it would have been nice to hear Frodo's thoughts, alongside Sam's thoughts.
However, in the dialogue, you're missing commas before the name Sam, as this occurred a few times in the beginning of the story. And "tearstained" needs a hyphen between "tear" and "stained". These are the errors I caught, but I'm not sure if there are other errors in the story.
Still, good work. Do you mind if I put this story in my community?
| pianobookspolitics chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
This is a nice story about their friendship, though it is slightly difficult to imagine them talking so much while walking through Mordor. Nevertheless, I think that especially Sam was very much in-character, and you described Frodo's emotions well.
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I like this. This is a really good Frodo and Sam friendship story.