Reviews for Slumber Party
Charlie Baker chapter 1 . 5/18
This is another script
Rancis: Can we have a slumber party
Vanellope: No, remember what happened last time me and the other girls had a slumber party and you boys destroyed it so we are never having a party again
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4
This could be another script
Rancis: Can we have a slumber party
Vanellope: No remember what happened last time me and the other girls had a slumber party and you destroyed it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31
This script can be after the 9th attempt the boys try to get in their slumber party
" Boys what are you doing here get out this is the 10th time you get tried to come in our party" said Vanellope
"We want to be in your party we want to be in your party we want to be in your party we want to be in your party" demanded Rancis Gloyd and Swizzle
"Uh oh" said the other girls
"Rancis Gloyd and Swizzle stop behaving like this get out now" said Vanellope
"You know what we're going to destroy your slumber party because we weren't invited" said the boys
"I think we need to get out of here" said Taffyta
"Run everyone" said Vanellope
Then Rancis Gloyd and Swizzle destroy the slumber party
"Rancis Gloyd and Swizzle how dare you destroy our slumber party, that's it we are going to the starting line"
The boys are crying
"Stop crying this is all your fault we are in under complete shock of how bad you boys behaved there you destroyed our slumber party" said Candlehead
"We are so sorry" said Gloyd
"Your apologizes are denied" said Jubileena
"You had to misbehave there and do you know that you just ruined our slumber party" said Crumbelina
"When we get to the starting line you three will be punished" said Snowanna Adorabeezle and Minty
When they got to the starting line
"Oh my god Rancis Gloyd and Swizzle I can't actually believe you 3 destroyed the girls slumber party" said Ralph
"Now we are going to punish you" said Felix
Prepare to be punished" said Calhoun
Everyone gives the boys punishments
1st punishment switching their genders
2nd punishment making their voices sound bad
3rd punishment peeing and pooping on them
4th punishment taking a really hot shower then a really cold shower
5th punishment destroying their favourite things
6th punishment making you have ugly looks
7th punishment jumpscaring you with our clown masks
8th punishment blasting songs you have
9th punishment watching the scariest movie in the world watching scary movies and listing to scary sounds
10th punishment sending them to the WGBH and BND of doom logos
11th punishment jumping off a really high cliff
12th punishment destroying your racing karts
13th punishment arresting you
14th punishment sending you to the audience
15th punishment turning you into tiny boys
16th punishment turning you into toddlers
17th punishment turning you into babies
18th punishment pouring food waste disgusting drinks poo pee and pushed into the ship's mess
19th punishment eating and drinking disgusting food and drinks
20th punishment pepper spraying them and licking the toilet
And final punishment killing them
That's the script after the 9th attempt the boys go into the slumber party
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
good story
vanellope420 chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
adorable :) :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
This is one of my favorite stories on this fanfiction! It's funny and has a good story theme! I really enjoyed this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Very OOC
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
This was very entertaining!
Jonathan chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
The boys got burned for spying; ooh yeah, boo yah, and did I mention, LOL!? And just when the boys thought they were going to get to hear the juicy stuff, which they were so looking forward to.

Crazy girls!

Classic, albeit clich├ęd, rivalry between boys and girls.
crumbelinamalarkey chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
it was cool
Jacob R. Davis chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Several months ago, I posted a suggestion to do an alternate ending. I'm thinking: what if Swizzle and the others didn't get caught by Schweetz and the other girls?
Jordan chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Nice Story
ajm5603 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
loved it!i just love it this story can go great with G.N.O it would be perfect! *saying in a happy mood*
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
what happened to the boys
Inception chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Ok so let me get this clear. If candlehead loves gloyd, and minty loves swizzle, and vanellope loves rancis, then why would they throw them in the fungeon? I'm totally pissed off right now. If this happened for real and I saw and heard everything about this, I'd beat the candy crap out of those three girls. OhMy
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