|Reviews for Twice Upon a Time|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14
finish the story you fuck up bich
| TheHandOfTheDarkness chapter 15 . 8/26
I admire this story a lot, I came here because I suddenly found myself watching the fight between Trunks and... Is it Freezer or Frieza (whatevs) and his father. I consider that part of DBZ my favourite still (and my favourite time-travel piece of media).
Somehow you managed to rise up to my expectations. No BS need to hide the future due to 'messing the timeline waahhh' or 'I'm not strong enough waahhhhhh'
Just someone who honestly doesn't want the trouble but knows when it's needed to come clean.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13
I feel like the timing isn't right. Vegeta Junior is like 100 years or so after Trunks.
| damienfarrar10 chapter 1 . 4/23
| Nooo chapter 9 . 3/12
Love your story, but ,dear Lord, not Chi Chi, she’s such an unbearable rabid harpy
| KashianXanthe chapter 53 . 1/30
I wish this was finished because it was very enjoyable. Very well written.
| RexHeros chapter 13 . 1/2
Vegeta does the destructo disk when Gohan turns into an ape during the Saiyan arc
| Yaoi-Nation chapter 53 . 12/20/2019
it saddens me that it has been almost four years since your last update ︿ really enjoyed this story. so much so that i have read it more than twice lol. i do hope you come back!
| Kitty in the Box chapter 53 . 11/12/2019
OMG what an amazing ride. I'm impressed you're able to put two timelines to coexist. the heartbreaking and exhilirating scenes melded flawlessly. I love this Vegeta you wrote. I love he is constantly evolving in character. everything about this fic is incredible and I most certainly hope you will update this still.
| MysticChemyst chapter 53 . 8/13/2019
Wowza. Looks like it's been more than three years since you last updated.
I have my own story that I haven't updated in ages but I do fully intend to get back to it...some day... :/
I sincerely hope that not only will you come back to finish the story, that you are well and happy wherever you are and whatever you are doing.
*sigh* it's my fault for starting a story and not realizing it wasn't finished...I try to always avoid that because of the ennui that ensues when I can't finish a good story.
And this was truly a great story. I found the characterization wonderful and quite accurate and it was extremely refreshing to read and learn about a future Vegeta and his feelings without having to go through all the incredible pride and pig-headedness.
Such a wonderful story, I hope I get to finish reading it some day.
Be well and best wishes.
| RenegadeForLife chapter 9 . 8/3/2019
Vegeta: Oh so Bulma hits him with a car and shoots at him and that's just fine but I just try to blow him up a little and you won't tell me where he is?
| Guest chapter 53 . 3/5/2019
I know you’ve probably given up on this story but I really hope you’ll keep going! It’s so awesome and I’m hooked!
| Aren serathy chapter 17 . 11/26/2018
Android 17 doesn’t get to “range the shit out of a park,” I am sad. Q.Q
(Yes that is cannon, he even has a family in super!)
| Bella Kuran 1 chapter 53 . 11/2/2018
Hi! I hope you are good. I'm asking if you're thinking to finish this history. It's amazing, please continue please. Sorry for my english, it's not my first language.
| Guest chapter 53 . 10/25/2018
man i really wish you'd come back to this. It's a really sweet story.
I hope the end of the trunks ark in super didn't kill your enthusiasm, the "official"
happenings shouldn't limit the potential of the series and characters as we know them.