Reviews for Consumed by Vengeance
Tilleidj chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
I like the concept, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter, but the last paragraph of chapter two kind of left me nonplussed. It's kinda sudden when you dropped the sexual tension bomb. I was thinking you'd take a more subtle approach, like small hints dropped along the way, until they finally act on their lust after their desire boils over or something like that.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
supert history
Windninja1000 chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
Great chapter! I can't wait till the next chapter! : D
puneetsingh chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
Quite the hurried ending
animenaruto46 chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
You thing seemed to be getting tense
Crossovernaru chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
Please update soon!
blueper chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
ah man. too short...

hope you update again soon
The DarkEnd Dragon chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
Is his Daugther Erza Scarlet (Uzumaki) or Kushina Uzumaki

Look Towards The Sky
Darkend Dragon
dragon matt blue chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
great ch hope for more
Shadow Knight Destroyer chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
This is good.
Gravemind497 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I like this one kyuubi, a little short but still intresting. I want this one to continue I wanna know who is Naruto's daughter Erza maybe?
daemonium venator chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
This looks good cant wait for more.
SoulReaperCrewe chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
This is cool :)
Snake King chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
What's next
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I dont see Jellal living long that's for sure I wonder what Erza will do, and if there's a chance she's Naruto's daughter.
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