|Reviews for Survival of the Fittest|
| Kikibell's kitten chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
how hilarious, I have a couple of friends who just recently went through a very similar situation and the husband was soooooo mad! At one point his best friend even told him: "You know, there's always the friend's rule?" "What is it?" "If you can't manage to get your wife pregnant, you could always ask a friend..."... it was so akward for a couple of months.. then his wife got pregnant and everybody was thinking bad things.. then the little girl was born and she looks exactly like her father, the husband..
| zekkers chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
as a mother who had to 'try' for quite a few months before our first child- THIS WAS FUNNY! And I could so see her getting all schedule oriented and killing the mood- it is hard enough for a normal couple to keep the fun during that time, let alone someone like H.
| Deccatrine chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
"Just like riding a broomstick." Oh lord. I was just randomly pinching my nose while I was reading that line and I made the most atrocious laugh-snort, so thanks for that. Cute one-shot!
| Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
ROFL Others may not find this funny, but it was halarous to me. XD
| Diosa Luna chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
jajajaja pobre severus que las mujeres siempre nos obsecionamos con ese tema, saludos y animo.
Me encanto el fic.
| magically speaking chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
im sure ive already reviewed this stry but i just love it. it's pretty funny!
| Loyal-Ruby chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Very nice story. I love it.
| Miravisu chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
The scene with Poppy and Albus, hiiiilarious! :D
| KT8812 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
this is mortified Snape at his tortured best!
it's a bloody masterpiece!
keep it up...
| thecircularsky chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Very funny! Loved it.
| Severus' Malfoy Maiden chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
I loved this story, it was so funny and TRUE!
| oscarg chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Loved this! Albus giving wanking advice was classic. Poor Snape!
| Megii of Mysteri OusStranger chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
(makes a face torn between disgust and giggles) I just about died. Really. My cheeks hurt. Very badly. And, oh god, ALBUS... So, so, so wrong. And so, so, so funny.
| SeverusHermioneForever chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
LOL!Albus dumbledore dirty minded?ROFL!I loved this poor severus lol
| elmo-doodle chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
oh goodness, this was brilliant. i've never laughed so much at Snape's expense, and Dumbledore and Poppy ganging up on him was priceless _ Really well written and in-character! D