|Reviews for Burning Gem|
| Dragon at play chapter 7 . 1/31
I really liked this version of the battle for Magix. Real exciting and dramatic.
What I also liked was Diaspro's more active role in the story. Since her and Bloom came to an understanding, she seems less petty and more concerned with the welfare of the dimension.
Seeing as this was not marked as complete, we'll be reading more of this adventure right. Please!
Great chapter. Hope to read more soon.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/29
what a great story this should be included in season 6 or atleast a something about bloom and diaspro as friends
| DragonFire Princess chapter 7 . 1/28
| nightmaster000 chapter 7 . 1/28
| Midnights-AM-Child chapter 6 . 1/15
This chapter was amazingly action-packed. I loved how you altered season one to fit this. You still have the feel of it too. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| To die upon a kiss chapter 6 . 12/25/2013
This is a great story. I just hope that Bloom and Sky don't end up together. Relationships just shouldn't survive that level of lying.
Anyway, I like your Bloom a lot better than the Bloom who currently appears on Nickbow...Nice job with her.
| DragonFire Princess chapter 6 . 10/22/2013
| Firehawk242 chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
Diaspro is my least favorite character in the show. She's shallow, spiteful, vicious, and really only there to get between Sky and Bloom. That's literally the only thing she does in the show. Your Diaspro is really clashing with my dislike for the character. You're making her too likeable! Stop it! You're destroying my perceptions of the character! I'm just kidding. Keep going with this story! I want to know what happens next!
| Midnight Lost chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
I am generally not into this pairing, but this is very good. I look forward to seeing more.
| Ander Arias chapter 6 . 10/10/2013
Wow, another update so quick! Great!
You know, this chapter made me think in something (well, rather than the chapter, the pasr where they restore Mirta) why they didn't think in asking help to a senior fairy or a teacher to do that. I mean, if a frshman fairy like Flora could do it...
| Dragon at play chapter 6 . 10/9/2013
Everybody that needs to be freed has been freed and Bloom has her mojo back.
Now it is time to turn the tide of this war.
Good chapter as always. Looking forward to reading how this turns out.
Till later, update soon.
| nightmaster000 chapter 6 . 10/9/2013
| Dragon at play chapter 5 . 10/8/2013
A nice re-telling of season 1, with Diaspro having more of a part in it.
Having Diaspro seeing Bloom as another women scorned and possably concerned for her wellfare, is refreshing and bods well to a possable real friendship later. Wonder if she'll become a Winx?
Great chapter. Look forward to reading what comes next.
Till later, update soon.
| Dragon at play chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
Great start to what looks to be fantastic story.
I like what-if stories, and this is right up there with the ones I can get into. Bloom and Diaspro being at least friendly. You got the awkwardness of the situation of their meeting.
Now on to the next one.
| Moreanswers24 chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
I am so excited it has been re-updated. Thank goodness there was no, " We need to go to Domino, which is an uninhabited planet and is probably one of the dangerous planets there is and we are just freshman fairies, but it is a one in a million chance, so lets go." Just straight forward to a big sister telling her to get her butt over to Roccalucce, my kind of story. Loved this line in particular.
"Calm down, Bloom! The excitement won't do you any good..." Sky said.
"The hell with calming down, Sky! I want my powers back so I can roast those Trix alive!" Bloom said vehemently, making Sky step back slightly in fear.
Can you roast Sky in a fit of "rage" please? That would be hilarious. Update soon