|Reviews for The Rise of Uzumaki Naruto|
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/27
Ok love the story but I have a that I dont get well one mainly and thats the hokage u cant have him decide to take seriously and have a backbone and then decide nope just get a by a 12 year old no matter how much he may favor him the fact of the matter is, is that that conversation should have ended with naruto fear and apologizing because in every way imaginable naruto was in the wrong he is a shinobi abd u cant have a shinobi blowing up like that over some information then not going to get everything straight and running off have to b dragged back and then tell off his superior the have stood up smacked naruto for court martialed him or atleast threatened it reason being is naruto needs that lessoned learned when he realizes he fucked up royally and is in absolutely no position to demand any thing from the hokage and then the hokage can explain shit to him now u have naruto thinking he can do what he wants and stuff and that just doesnt make for a good fanfic
| dwl3950 chapter 21 . 3/29
| bookoverlord chapter 21 . 1/9
Please don't forget about this story! I have laughed so much over the Naruto moments in the past few chapters X) It's a great story! I love the twists you make, your portrayal of the characters, as well as your writing. I'll keep waiting for the next chapter
| Amy chapter 21 . 1/5
Well I just stumbled into this story and really liked it. Sadly, it was updated wayy back in May. Can you please update sometime soon?
This one is too good to be left on hiatus.
| supermonky18 chapter 21 . 12/17/2014
Yo I really like the story it's good and all hope you continue to write it. But one question does Naruto still use his weights that he had on since I don't think they have been mentioned in the story lately and I don't remember them being taken off? But beside that great story
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/28/2014
Please don't tell me that you are suddenly suffering from Writers block!
| SERSMOKE chapter 21 . 11/28/2014
| FlameDragon14 chapter 21 . 11/12/2014
Where is your promised next chapter? It's been months. If you do get a chapter out I'm going to have to re-read everything just so that I know what's going on again.
| Revisions chapter 21 . 10/30/2014
Hurry up and release another 20 chapters
| HurricaneShippu chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Naruto wouldn't break down like a little kid, the only reason he cries is when he's incredibly happy about something inspirational or someone has died. Not once have I seen him become a stuttering mess in the manga. That just pissed me off. Like the whole write down a transformation jutsu as a forbidden technique in the scroll of seals. Think! Also, Naruto was supposed to learn one technique in it since he failed the jutsu portion of the graduation exam, so it is even more suspicious for him to steal something and not learn from it to pass the exam.
Hiruzen was watch the whole time, why is Naruto giving a report on the situation?
The main reason why the shadow clone technique is forbidden is that it will kill most people who try to use it because it is so chakra intensive. Not because those that can use it will try it for learning too much sh*t at once. The mental stress is possibly the third edge to the sword, but the chakra requirements are why it is forbidden.
Why the paper work cliché? It's not funny. It's been said that Hiruzen couldn't maintain shadow clones because of his age. I get the feeling that Hiruzen has been doing the paper work so long that he doesn't need clones to power through it.
I honestly feel like the changes you have made to the canon lore will have no impact on the story plot wise, so it just feels like you don't know your material all that well. If you ever are unsure, don't be afraid to hop on the wikia for Naruto. It will help you with characterisations and your timeline. It is a veritable goldmine that people obtusely ignore.
This dissatisfying initial chapter isn't a great start, in my opinion. But since these are just opening chapter blunders, I hope they won't recur in later chapters.
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/21/2014
It has been over 5 months since your last update!
What is the problem, please don't be dead?!
| FF Fan chapter 21 . 10/2/2014
Hope you didn't die, I've liked your story thus far. If you didn't stop breathing and are still planning on updating, the only recommendation I
have currently (I'll drop a few more reviews in the pertinent chapters) is
for a bit more (but not too much, some fics overdo it) NaruHina and also a bit more of the other teams. I know the other teams don't really add much to the fray but if you put a few thousand words on each time within each of your earlier chapters you could boost your word count while adding foundation for depth later on. Hope you haven't abandoned this fic without at least one pairing! :(
| nicholas.souddress chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Nice chapter, and you remembered that only his and tsnadai have the perfect hiagi...I say that because you NEVER hear any one else doing it like thay do
| CamoflaugeMan chapter 21 . 9/13/2014
This is a good story and a great chapter. Like the character building of this story and overall storyness of it I think it's been a little more than two weeks for your update bro haha life happens but yea keep it up and I look forward to the next chapter
| IcShenninagans chapter 21 . 8/20/2014