Reviews for When The Night Fades
Distant Halo chapter 16 . 4/6/2005
Love the story so far and I really hope you finish the story soon. There is not enough Auron x Lulu stories out there and I am glad I found a few on this site but do wish there were more. You are a very good writer, keep up the good work.
closetfreak86 chapter 16 . 1/17/2005
u can't be finished! please please juss continue the story! i luvv it! i want to know what happens next!
Seti chapter 16 . 10/5/2004
I love this fanfic but why do you always take so long to update please hurry and update soon. I'm a huge Aulu fan so please carry on I want to know what will happen next.
Myles chapter 16 . 7/23/2004
you may have not ever heard of me, but I'm just a fan of FFX fan fics and came across your , wonderous story. I read the entire thing and I must say you do have talent and so this is a review so here it is

Story line 10\10

excellent story I think that pairing up Lulu with Auron was excellent and although you added Kai and Cess it became a great twist in the story however try to pace yourself when it comes to switch the point of views like have a limit to when to switch over

Grammer 9\10

I found your vocabulary great but the context you used it in was sometimes confusing but than agian i can become confused easily ;)

Personailties 10\10

what I mean by personalities is how well you captured the charcters well... personailty and well I thought it was great although you may have changed his\her personailty it was for the better

Overall 10\10

This was an exceddingly good story on my standtards and I enjoyed reading it. If you do not wish to respond to my review I understand

Dee chapter 16 . 5/16/2004
Excellent..I liked this. It didn't rush too much. Want to know what will happen next!
Poetrim chapter 16 . 2/9/2004
Yay, soo great. More chapters! I cant wait!
Banks chapter 16 . 2/7/2004
I hope to read the next chapter ASAP.
SlythMentalCase chapter 16 . 2/7/2004
This chapter, as well as all the others, was very well written and a satisfaction to my crave. The only question I have is:
WHy are there Lulu Dolls int he Al Bhed Home?
Sephiroth.H chapter 16 . 2/4/2004
Hahahaha~You're So quickly this time~_Thanks a lot!
I 'm Really excited to c Gippal appear...4 Rikku!
K':Thanks 4 Not making us wait too long this time...Keep it!
Ashely:AH~Kai shan's Too poor in this chapter~~lol
Sephioth:"being dragged around by Tidus like a dog"?Bad Tidus!
QQTTBB:I agree...the author's...evil...
But I REALLY want to c what will happen next!
Mudan:Oh~It's Gippal saved Kai~Cool!Can't wait 4 next chappy~!
Agent Dream x chapter 15 . 2/2/2004
Again- No flaws in this story aside from... THEY SHOULD APPEAR MORE OFTEN! Plese? For me? I'll give you a cookie~!
EDWORD chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
YEAH~Another chapie~I eally love this FAnfic...Good writting,story,characters...The only problem is...You're Too Lazy updating!Do u know how long you had made me wait?You Evil Author!
Sephiroth.H chapter 15 . 2/2/2004
Aha~It's me reviewing!
Love this chatpie,Can't wait to c more~~
And my friends have something to say 2:
K':haha!At last!You 've always made us waiting so long!
:I love this chapter! much Kai&Lulu...(don't hit me!)Can't wait 4 more!
TTYY:I only want to say...Update Sooner!
Bunan Tsokolatte chapter 14 . 1/28/2004
omg, it took me so LONG to find this story again! i had read it once, but then forgot to put it in my favorite stories list _' i LOVE the story! keep going!
Agent Dream x chapter 14 . 1/27/2004
AMAZING! Please, write more! PLEASE!
Arinya chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
REally sweet, great, detailed writing. But I don't think Auron would ever make bodily contact like that.
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