Reviews for Visits
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5
This may not have any registered genre, but it sure made me cry.
M. L. Zhang chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
The dialogue from the book flows seemlessly with your writing. I really couldn't tell which lines were actual HG lines. Beautiful! I always thought hijacked Peeta was sad and hoped for Katniss to be able to bring back his old self. Well done.
LivEviL chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
I've enjoyed reading through your stories and I just wanted to drop a line to let you know that your coal-to-pearl bit isn't exactly accurate. Were you thinking of diamonds, perhaps? Pearls are generally made by oysters. Regardless, you have some beautiful ideas and are a talented writer. Keep it up!
radicalnarina chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Loved it! You really captured the pure and raw essence of their love. Thefeeeslssssxjakfnjss. lol added in my favorites! (:

-thedandelions
mansts chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I love it!
mrs.becca chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Beautiful and sad. Perfect as usual!
TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I really liked this! Great job - I wish this had been part of the book!

-Charmy
DoubleKnot-NoSugar-WindowsOpen chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
It's so natural, I couldn't even notice where you started and the original finished.