Reviews for Break the Cycle
Jonathan chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
This is the second time I've read a fanfic that provides a better ending than what the game gives. Congratulations stranger, you've made something great better.
rybird chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
wow... just wow. Very good
Prince of Havok chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I really liked this. If this was the case in the game it would explain Booker's tone of voice when he asks if it was Anna in the other room. I hope we see something like this in the DLC.
feels chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
the saddest of feels arounds...
HopelessRomantic1818 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Dear God, here come the feels again. I still kinda wonder if Booker from the game's universe woke up there and experienced that cutscene or if it was another Booker from another universe...oh well. Lovely story!
KotoriRod chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I seriously cried at the end of the game and was like "OMG! SO HAPPY FOR YOU DEWITT!"
Insta fave on this ;w;

Though I hope we get some DLCs to explain this further... and the sort of future that DeWitt must face now
TheOneAndOnlyEnigma chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This is the ending I wanted but didn't get.

In a way, Booker gets his happy ending, and the chain of events is done away with.

Anna is returned to him, and life goes one.

But however I feel like the story should have given some insight to where Elizabeth would go from here.

Now that she, basically can go anywhere at anytime.

However I digress. Great Story! Great Writing.


Well done.
a chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Nice story.