|Reviews for What Is Desire|
| Nanyin chapter 1 . 9/1
Excellent work, you really brought out the complexities of the characters.
| Stranger chapter 1 . 1/22
This is the hottest shit I've ever read! And oh lord the writing in general... Perfect! And the smut... I need to come to back to my senses..
| DBZBV1991 chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
"his teal eyes" are you implying that he reached the SSJ form while having sex? I'd love that! :D
I love the whole story and I can totally see this as the way the two got entangled!
| linecallit chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
fantastic I adored it.
| ThisShitIsBananrama chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
This was really good! The sexy parts were done very well without being too raunchy. This is probably the best set of sex scenes I have read on this site! I really liked this! :D
| Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
Wow that was incredible engaging and sexy
| newprofileiscoded.ice chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
this is literally one of my top favorites. so well-written , and detailed. not to mention all-around hot. *puts out flame* amazing job. you're definitely on my follow/favorite author list.
| newprofileiscoded.ice chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
this was perfect. I loved it all.
| nofcksgiven chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
This was such a fantastic read. I absolutely love how vivid all the scenes were... or maybe I've just been looking at Vegebul porn artwork too much, haha. Nah, 90% of the reason I can see the scenes play out in my head has to do with your writing. Awesome job, btw.
This entire fic is gold. I love every single word. I esp. love the anal play. Like, YES BULMA WOULD BE INTO THAT. And also when Yamcha(?) walked in on them with Bulma having one of the best orgasm of her life. That was awesome. I like the tender moments Vegeta and Bulma shared, too. It wasn't too much to the point where they were suddenly OOC. Vegeta can say nice things and still be kind of an impatient ass at the same time. When he gave her the ring but didn't know why, I thought that was brilliant. It seems like something he would say and Vegeta hasn't learn much about loving someone so his statement fits. He was trying, tho and that says a lot.
Bulma is everything. I love how she can feel/sense when Vegeta is around or is hurt. Their connection is so precious. And I can't even be sad for her in the last scene bc I've always consider Bulma to be independent and strong. She can get through anything, with or without Vegeta. She's amazing.
Thanks for sharing this!:)
| Prl16 chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
It was great!
| Mihzuki chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
This was beautiful. My favorite interpretation of the three year gap so far. Loved it.
| MalachiteFlames chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
| rivruskende chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
What a wonderful one shot! Very well done!
| Hive Queen To Harbinger chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
I just want to say, I was halfway through reading this when my husband came on to me out of nowhere, and it was awesome, so yeah. Thanks.
| rennysusanto chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Love it... simply GOOD!