|Reviews for Naruto: Search for Greatness|
| Murphy's laws 666 chapter 5 . 1/15/2016
What the heck happened to Tsunami?
| MaddenMobileJesus chapter 7 . 10/26/2014
Double s ranked is kinda far fetched isn't it ? O_o
| MaddenMobileJesus chapter 6 . 10/26/2014
He threw his shirt off in the middle of the restaurant haha
| WonderRin chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
| YesOrYes chapter 16 . 5/6/2014
Kurotsuchi is... a GIRL?
| phongcae23 chapter 18 . 2/1/2014
Gotta admit...this isn't like anything I've read in Naruto before, but...ITS AMAZING KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ...and that chapter where they went into Suna...please...please just murder them all.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/31/2014
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/31/2014
Nice cactus jack impression. Nice work
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/11/2013
WARNING: THIS IS NOT A FLAME! I AM TRYING(?) TO POINT OUT A MAJOR MISUNDERSTANDING FOR ALL AUTHORS! PLEASE GET OUR FELLOW AUTHORS TO AT LEAST AKNOWLEDGE THIS!
Dude... the Rookie eleven was formed after Sasuke defected, the Rookie twelve was unofficially formed during the exams, and the Rookie nine is the 'NINE' graduates of the ninja academy that we originally find out in the team assignments; Team 7, Team 8, and Team 10, Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto, Kiba, Shino, and Hinata, and Chouji, Shikamaru, and Ino, in their respective team placement. The Rookie twelve is previous list with the addition of Team nine, Neji, Lee, and Tenten. This is something that needs to be realized unless the author intends to have everyone graduate at the same time or something like that... again this is not a flame.
I thank you for your time reading this rant... or not... if you are still there... get to another reviewer... seriously... stop wasting your life reading this... if you still are... get... a... f'ing... L-I-F-E!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Dude... is there really a book like that [How to screw with people(especially little siblings)]? If so, how much and where can I get one!
| willredninja chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
read first chapter could not resist Naruto chakra is
| D3monOfRazgr1z chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
This is a damn good story it should be getting a lot more attention. I have one complaint and that is that your focusing on Ino and not enough on Haku and Kuro. Overall a great story and I hope you update.
| YDdraigGoch94 chapter 4 . 10/26/2013
How can it be Konoha 11? Surely its Rookie 9?
| Swifteagle chapter 4 . 10/12/2013
I love the upbeat Sasuke, its a refreshing change.
| Reclusive Dork chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
May I give you a few characters?
the first, His name is Luo Dao Long. He has hip-length sanguine-maroon hair tied into a long ponytail(with a second hairtie in the middle), electric white eyes(no, not byakugan white, real white iris, with an actual pupil), the chinese script for 'master smith' tattoed in the upper left corner of his forehead with two crossed hammers and a chain, and considerable stubble.
He wears a Black fire-proof fibermail shirt, a dark gray fire-proof fibermail jacket, and black pants made of the same stuff. when he gets out of the forge, though, he wears a white traveling cloak(with lots of hidden pockets) and a chinese straw hat.
This guy makes very powerful swords, such as a trilogy of katana with healing attributes, that can hurt just as much as heal. Try living long when you're Healing jutsu won't work because the victim's Blood clotting cells were all killed! the katana uses harmful medical chakra to stop bodily functions, poison the blood stream, or just drain nutrients.
His Weapon of choice... Is a Large hammer on a long bo staff, made entirely out of Oseishinkane(Great spirit metal), otherwise known as Orihalcon, the ultimate chakra metal. That's the only metal he uses for specialized works, unless it's not got a special ability. The hammer itself looks rather plain, other than the emblem of a tailed vortex on it's sides, and it's dark violet handle. the head is a deep gold.
His hammer has the ability to manipulate gravity to an extent, so he can crush things... a lot easier. but he can also blast.
It's name is Gun'Otsuki. Force Maul.
The only other chakra metal he uses is mythril(well, he uses normal chakra metal if he doesn't like you), and he can have that made a lot easier. he uses that for Not very Special, but very powerful chakra weapons.
Special weapons have a special ability.
Chakra weapons can channel chakra better than normal weapons.
If he doesn't like the client, he'll use a less powerful metal for the weapon. like, mythril for legendary, and basic chakra metal for chakra weapon. and he'll still charge full price.
here's a couple apprentices for Luo Dao.
Yotogi Shikei and Tanshoku Yaseo are both studying under luo dao. however, yaseo is the one who will inherit.
Shikei has spiky black hair-not like Obito's, but more like Axel from Kingdom Hearts 2, bloodshot white eyes(but they actually have a pupil, and you can tell the iris from the whites), pale skin, and a challenging smirk eternally etched on his face. he has a hobby of challenging people to the most ridiculous things, and rewarding them if they manage it(or if they don't run away). He's rather sadistic, by the way. he wears no shirt, but he wears a tattered shoulder cowl, two belts criscrossing over his stomach(and one underneath holding his pant up), and baggy pants. he also wears bulky boots and gloves.
His weapon of choice is his unique dual Scythes-they're a bit too big to be called a sickle, but he wields them in one hand, the Shinda kama. he personally edits them every so often, and every time they look even more gruesome. what they do is they can link to any source of any kind of energy- chakra, spiritual energy, and use that as a catalyst for their dangerous attacks. they will alway return to the source they are linked to, and will never harm it. they can only link to one source at a time.
His main bloodline is to manipulate the spiritual energy inside of chakra, as a separate energy. What he Likes to do is imitate Death from Darksiders, after he saw a western movie.(he says he wants to make a mask, but every time he does, it comes out wrong.)
Yaseo has long messy White hair and white eyes, slightly less pale skin than shikei, and usually wears an emotionless mask unless he's around friends. He never shows his emotions to an enemy, but when he's on stage, he really becomes the character(did I mention he has a hobby of acting?). he too wears no shirt, but wears an open black jacket with big sleeve ends and chains wrapped around the arms, and poofy black pants. no shoes.
His weapon of choice is a very long White double-ended spear with a black elaborate gothic Cross on each blade side, Named Kurayami no Haku Chū(white pillar of darkness). It's power is to transform the shadows into Pale armor/soldiers/weapons/beams of WHITE shadow. Kurayami no Haku Chu can separate into two shorter spears. They're still good length, though. about four and a half feet each.
His bloodline is to distort space.