|Reviews for Growing Up|
| Missbeauty96 chapter 9 . 3/9
| LoverGurrl411 chapter 9 . 2/14
Inner teen voice: Omg! Manly Jacob is sooo epic! I love it, and I sincerely love the direction you're taking this story. The way you set up Jacob becoming Alpha was wonderfully paced between the last couple of chapters and this one. It's about time, and i'm loving everything about this story (except for Bella's crybaby-ness-which she surprisingly lacked in this chapter, so bravo) Lol.
Constructive Criticism: I noticed that you tend to forget sometimes to use the possessive apostrophe (ex. Jakes instead of Jake's). Just something to take into account when you are writing. Also, sometimes you confuse the affirmative tense (ex. wasn't instead of was). Just something to keep in mind when proof reading.
Sorry, just the English teacher coming out of me, but your writing is already wonderful, so taking these small things (which are really just proof reading material) into account can only make your writing stronger. You do have a lovely way with the narrative voice.
Sorry for the long review, and I hope you Update Soon! :)
| ludivine77 chapter 9 . 1/26
i ove your fanfiction i am waiting for a new chapter
| not important chapter 9 . 1/20
I love your story, but you are taking to long to write another chapter!
| Imconfused2013 chapter 9 . 12/19/2013
I just found this story and omg! Please update it!
| AMR chapter 9 . 12/15/2013
Are you going to write another chapter?
| echo58 chapter 9 . 10/21/2013
I just spent the afternoon reading this story; YOU MUST UPDATE! PLEASE!
| doritotasticwiz chapter 9 . 10/8/2013
Daaaang. You are a GOOD writer. Very cleaver. All of it. I'm so looking forward to what comes next. Jake should tell her about the imprint. Soon. And I'm really hoping shell take it well. She needs to get over herself and let loose. :) Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/4/2013
This definitely should be completed! Only nine chapters in and it's already awesome.
| radix chapter 9 . 9/19/2013
WoW! This is my favorite bella jacob... simply love it...
| jharv241 chapter 9 . 8/25/2013
Awesome chapter! Very exciting I loved it from beginning to end. Jake was awesome!
| snow eopard chapter 9 . 8/25/2013
wow i love this but i think jake needs to tone down a bit
| leelator chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
Personally, I find jealous, possessive Jake a real turn on. Just can't help it. ;p And I've always wanted to see him beat the crap out of Mike. It's so richly deserved.
Really an interesting tale! I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope to be reading more. Thanks for all of your hard work on this.
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Amazing! Best Twilight fanfiction I've read. Can't wait for the next update! :)
| ginmc chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
Lovinh it so far! Can't wait for more!