|Reviews for Girls Night Out|
| Guest chapter 46 . 4/3
Thank you so much for this story. You built beautiful characterizations and a story that felt true and honest and I hope you know that the many hours you spent researching and writing are much appreciated. This was the first story that I kept bookmarked on all my devices and I always, always dropped everything to read the new chapters. I'm looking forward to your new stories which I'm sure I will love as much as I loved this one. Much thanks.
| spectacularmadness chapter 45 . 4/3
I just want to say that this story has been one hell of a ride. With the highs and lows of each character and in the end they all come out okay and happy. I really enjoyed reading each chapter despite the fact that I never once left a comment or review until now. And that makes me feel bad. I've been reading your stories for a long while now and I don't think I've ever left a review here or on Tumblr. But I want you to know that you're an amazing writer. I can't wait to read more of your works FanFiction or originals. They're always a joy to read despite the emotional turmoil you put your characters though. Lol.
Thank you for your talent and sharing it with us. And I say wholeheartedly.
spectacularmadness / Natalie
| Mscallo chapter 45 . 4/2
WOW... You really did such a great job on this story. Sad to see it end. The outcome for Jo was way beyond what I expected. She came about full circle- not only on herself but on the one s around her. This story was amazing to me since it was Jo 's story and not Katniss and Peeta .. It was a nice change. Lots of work for you(as the writer) and all your other helpers for this story. Question- Jo never did tell Brue about what had happened to her younger sister did she? Thanks for such an amazing story- it was well worth the ride.
| aaltena26 chapter 45 . 4/2
Oh I loved it! Kind of sad it's over though. I love Brue and Jo together.
| NinjaJacq chapter 46 . 4/2
I'm crying here! This was a beautiful story but also fun. It's amazing to see such well written diversity and your intense writing a researching most certainly paid off. Congratulations on such an awesome story. While I'm sad to see it go I'm also greatly looking forward to your new works. Best of luck with your original novel too - I'm looking forward to hearing more about it! Thank you for a wonderful journey.
| obsessedchick44 chapter 46 . 4/1
omg I can only imagine how much research and time and effort you put into this story. but I believe that it was all worth it, I loved this story so much
| obsessedchick44 chapter 45 . 4/1
OMG SO SO AMAZING I LOVED IT! and all of your characterization. I hope you will comings writing !
| colleenegan25 chapter 46 . 4/1
Wow! That was an amazing end to a fabulous adventure! I loved seeing Everlark from Jo's perspective because she could call them out in times and the way we all wish we could. The food porn was glorious with all its delectable descriptions. My favorite part of this story was Jo her journey and her dealing with her ghosts was so real. I laughed, I cried and I told my fiancé about the changes with each new chapter. You're a very talented writer. Thank you for this story and the lessons it taught. Thanks for helping me feel less alone when I didn't feel worthy. I look forward to reading your other stories but know that this one will always have a special place in my heart.
| Guest chapter 46 . 4/1
Just a small msge to say thanku for an amazing story I adored all the characters Jo being my absolute fav with her wit and filthy mourh. I've always been a peeta loyalist but I must say I think I feel in love with brue thanks for the awesomeness that is girls night out x
| EStrunk chapter 45 . 4/1
I have never wanted this made into a movie as much as I did when I found out that they said their vows in drunken, Outlander Gaelic! The cake is killing me. You also have a gift for settings. The boat was wonderful. I love Jo's observation that each of their relationships has its problems, but they're worth it and ultimately happy. I'm Catholic, so a little sad that none of them can have faith in a permanent God-given bond (which they may have accidentally agreed to in their vows), but love the beauty of where Jo, and all of her friends, have arrived. Thanks so much for all of your work and creativity (and funny, funny moments) and for this epic work.
| everlasting1286 chapter 45 . 4/1
Amazing! I'm so glad i decided too read this and appreciate all of the time and effort you put into it, it's wonderfully written and it's such a complete au world you've created with amazing details. Thank you! :-D
| mybookloveaffair chapter 46 . 4/1
I can't believe it's over :( I really have enjoyed this story! Can't wait to continue reading The Hunter! I'm glad that Brue and Jo worked out and that Katniss found her yes (took her long enough). Is there gonna be an epilogue for this story?
| MLA chapter 46 . 3/31
What a fantastic way to end this. Congrats to you for such a great work!
| Tippers chapter 45 . 3/31
I'm so sad to see this end! Wonderful ending to such a fun story! You made the characters so real! Love that Brue! Fantastic job!
| ForFutureReference chapter 45 . 3/31
You really know how to get mileage from a chapter, and due to the nature of it, I think I may have to keep my review on the laconic side.
I think everyone saw the "yes" coming from the Everlark side, but it's great how you held off for it to the very end.
Now Jo and Brue on the other hand... you really knew how to throw a curveball; I actually had to read that section several times. How did they even find a minister?
I really like the way you had Jo go through a baptism of sort... and how things went from tense to hilarious that the water temp of the Pacific pushed away all thoughts (I never swam in Cali, but always loved going for a dip in Puget Sound and the spring-fed streams back home).
It's nice to have Angus have the final word; the ship didn't sail as far as he let on it seems.
I can just see it now: "Kitten" Hawthorne now has the floor.
And finally... Peeta and Jo's total BROTP (with all the food porn to go with it).
So after going through this snark and turbulence of these past 300k words, I'll just end this by saying great job and good luck for whatever will come next.