|Reviews for Girls Night Out|
| colleenegan25 chapter 46 . 4/1/2015
Wow! That was an amazing end to a fabulous adventure! I loved seeing Everlark from Jo's perspective because she could call them out in times and the way we all wish we could. The food porn was glorious with all its delectable descriptions. My favorite part of this story was Jo her journey and her dealing with her ghosts was so real. I laughed, I cried and I told my fiancé about the changes with each new chapter. You're a very talented writer. Thank you for this story and the lessons it taught. Thanks for helping me feel less alone when I didn't feel worthy. I look forward to reading your other stories but know that this one will always have a special place in my heart.
| Guest chapter 46 . 4/1/2015
Just a small msge to say thanku for an amazing story I adored all the characters Jo being my absolute fav with her wit and filthy mourh. I've always been a peeta loyalist but I must say I think I feel in love with brue thanks for the awesomeness that is girls night out x
| EStrunk chapter 45 . 4/1/2015
I have never wanted this made into a movie as much as I did when I found out that they said their vows in drunken, Outlander Gaelic! The cake is killing me. You also have a gift for settings. The boat was wonderful. I love Jo's observation that each of their relationships has its problems, but they're worth it and ultimately happy. I'm Catholic, so a little sad that none of them can have faith in a permanent God-given bond (which they may have accidentally agreed to in their vows), but love the beauty of where Jo, and all of her friends, have arrived. Thanks so much for all of your work and creativity (and funny, funny moments) and for this epic work.
| everlasting1286 chapter 45 . 4/1/2015
Amazing! I'm so glad i decided too read this and appreciate all of the time and effort you put into it, it's wonderfully written and it's such a complete au world you've created with amazing details. Thank you! :-D
| mybookloveaffair chapter 46 . 4/1/2015
I can't believe it's over :( I really have enjoyed this story! Can't wait to continue reading The Hunter! I'm glad that Brue and Jo worked out and that Katniss found her yes (took her long enough). Is there gonna be an epilogue for this story?
| MLA chapter 46 . 3/31/2015
What a fantastic way to end this. Congrats to you for such a great work!
| Tippers chapter 45 . 3/31/2015
I'm so sad to see this end! Wonderful ending to such a fun story! You made the characters so real! Love that Brue! Fantastic job!
| ForFutureReference chapter 45 . 3/31/2015
You really know how to get mileage from a chapter, and due to the nature of it, I think I may have to keep my review on the laconic side.
I think everyone saw the "yes" coming from the Everlark side, but it's great how you held off for it to the very end.
Now Jo and Brue on the other hand... you really knew how to throw a curveball; I actually had to read that section several times. How did they even find a minister?
I really like the way you had Jo go through a baptism of sort... and how things went from tense to hilarious that the water temp of the Pacific pushed away all thoughts (I never swam in Cali, but always loved going for a dip in Puget Sound and the spring-fed streams back home).
It's nice to have Angus have the final word; the ship didn't sail as far as he let on it seems.
I can just see it now: "Kitten" Hawthorne now has the floor.
And finally... Peeta and Jo's total BROTP (with all the food porn to go with it).
So after going through this snark and turbulence of these past 300k words, I'll just end this by saying great job and good luck for whatever will come next.
| donna79 chapter 45 . 3/31/2015
What a wonderful ending to a beautful, heart tugging story. You had my attention from the moment I stumbled onto this story two years ago. I know that I haven't reviewed every chapter but that doesn't mean that I didn't enjoy them. You have real honest to God talent and Iam so glad that you chose to share it with your readers.
| sunshinebear711 chapter 46 . 3/31/2015
I can't believe this is over. :-( I'm kinda sad that I won't get any more updates with this story. I remember spending several nights staying up late to read it when I found it several chapters in, and then compulsively reading every chapter when it went up no matter what time of day (even if it meant at work or the middle of the night).
So I just want to say, thank you. This was amazing.
| chele20035 chapter 46 . 3/31/2015
;) you mean we aren't going to the Highland games this year? It's not too late to make camping reservations!
| chele20035 chapter 45 . 3/31/2015
I'm laughing through my tears. That was wonderful! I'm do very proud of you and of this... your wonderful baby that you have shared with us. Thank you friend. You did good.
| AlwaysEverlark chapter 19 . 3/18/2015
Love this chapter! Katniss has really messed it !
| obsessedchick44 chapter 44 . 3/8/2015
aww Brue is so freaking sweet!
| Hawtsee chapter 44 . 3/7/2015
God, I am the absolute worst. I read this the moment I saw you'd updated but I haven't been able to post a review since then.
I honestly cried during reading this part the first time, and re-reading it tonight, I cried again. Elizabeth's eulogy was just so moving. The whole chapter was moving. Seeing Jo's friends rally around her was very touching. And this time, she actually noticed it and allowed it. I personally think that Gale is the bravest person alive to take somebody who hates him at the best of times to a shooting range and put a gun in her hand while she's emotionally unstable and then stand there beside her. That takes guts. I love that their friends now, but it's a real shame that it took a death for Jo to get past all her dumb Gale prejudices and see what a great guy he is. Also, I love that she's hell bent on corrupting his siblings.
Jo took so many steps forward in this chapter that she ran a metaphorical marathon as well as a literal one. To see her fully embracing therapy, and stop pushing everybody away was a huge victory for her.
Her reunion with Brue was so beautifully done. The way they just went from awkward hello to dancing in each other's arms was so wonderful. And Jo finally took a chance with him. Amazing.
Wonderful chapter. I'm so sad that we have to let these amazing characters go. I'm not ready for it.