|Reviews for To Be His Queen|
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Bella has the coolest parents..
| Analitica chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD PLEASE UPDATE SOON I NEED MORE
| Jeraly chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Love it! Thanks for sharing it with us.
| EmmaRandomAs chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
Awesome chapter, I love how you've developed it! looking forward to your next update.
| AbbeNormal chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Awesome beginning! Outstanding! If this first chapter is anything to go by, this is going to be one of your best stories ever! I can't wait! Good luck!
I remember my first love. Larry. I fell head over heels for him. In high school, we were so "it". But, he reminded me a lot of Edward. No touching, just small kisses. When we went to different colleges, we broke up. I met my future husband in college. Got married, but there was always that shadow of Larry in my mind. Not that David wasn't my life...just, well...you know how first loves are. Our school had a 5 year class reunion. I went by myself because Dave had to work. Larry was there. He walked up to me...kissed my cheek, and said.."there is someone I want you to meet." I walked over to this couple talking, Larry reached out to the girl, I about died...and said "excuse me, can I borrow my husband, please? " And, there it was...the shadow was gone...just like that! lol
You have a lovely day!
| dolhpin33 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Can't wait to read more, please update again soon.
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Very interesting. I can't wait to read on.
I always thought that Bella deserved something after graduation because she had worked so hard to please her dad.
I know College is a huge expense but it doesn't do her any good if she isn't in her right mind. Time off sounds the best.
| roon0 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I am loving the start of your story. Looking forward to more.
| Melody-Rose-20 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Great start. It's good to see that Renee truly cares for Bella.
| yana0808 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
| Fullofpassion09 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Sounds pretty good, looking forward o seeing her journey.
| MoonlitSnowFox chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
A lovely first chapter. Bittersweet.
| LuvinTwilight143 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
love it can't wait for more!
| natashar chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
cant wait for more
| feelingcowgirlish chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Interesting! When will there be more?