Reviews for We Built Our Own World
CovenantGirlLoki chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
I seriously loved it! You had me worried at one point when you said that arthur was reminded why he diesnt trust land dwellers, i thought that maybe he was going to go to the wrong boat and either get hurt, like shot in the tail, or captured! (i may write a spin off its ok with you, if not i dont mind) the end was a little rushed but not really if you know what i mean... Like it may have been better if you showed Cobbs reaction or Ariadnes but all in all LOVED IT
Ps, who wouldnt want a sexy merman that looked like Arthur ;)