Reviews for Pretenses and Ecstasy
PanPeterPitter chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
I just wonder how Near will be throughout the story... t was excellent so far! And I'm starting to like your OC, Jewel's a cute alias
kufq2akzenblihopLK chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
Oh, I don't know. They're both pretty good if you ask me o.o Just leaves me wondering how long he can deny it for is all and by it I mean his thoughts haha
kufq2akzenblihopLK chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Aww Adorable! "" Going back to the top :( I wonder why she would think he parents died because of her. Would it be revealed in later chapters? And I wonder what special abilities she has, well, will read to find out *thumbs up* Nice!
001100 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
The story is going very well so far! It's cute and I like it a lot. I hope you update soon c:
gerridith chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
a brewing ... love story in the making ...
The Low Brass Dude chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
It was better than the last chapter, please keep going!
Nearfangirl chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
There's some ultimate fluff going on there... I love it :) update soon
Animanizanny chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
This is so cute! I'm not ordinarily one who likes Near/OC fics but this is very adorable.

The little romance building is sweet but I hope it isn't too rushed:) I could see a beautiful plot building with a long term issue of denial from our struggling-to-remain-emotionless Near and it would keep him in char. Too much fluff too soon has always been the demise of a lot of these types of stories.

Moving on, Jewel fascinates me and I like how you incorporated a sense of mystery with her parents and her special abilities:) I bet she's got some real deep stuff underneath the cute and quirky surface;)

All in all, I really enjoyed this and I'll be looking forward to another chapter hopefully soon. Toodles!:D
God Of Twilight chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
I love this story! It's adorable and makes my heart swell with it's cuteness! Update soon!
girl09 chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Oh my gosh... that was freaking cute! lolz Near's so awkwardly cute there :D update soon!
lehkira chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Gahh 0/0 WHY STOP THERE?! He was just getting all.. cute YOU SIR (Even if chuu are a ma'am) have inspired me! :D Maybe I'll write.. well..something :o
The Loud Kitchen Ninja chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
It was so cute! Near's awkwardness with the physical contact made me continuously smile. Keep up the good work! You're an amazing author! I look forward to the next update :D
girl09 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
omg. I am a total Near fan and I love Near fics! I love your story so far! continue to update. btw, i like ur OC she's cute :3 and it's nice to think that she's somewhat Near's counterpart
claimmyvictory chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
omg,...that was so cute! please update soon. Oh and i love your OC's alias :))
Novellefreak chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
This sounds very interesting _ I'm happy that you decided to do a Near-fic, since we need more if these in the Death Note fandom
Btw Jewel is a cute alias
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