|Reviews for Your gone|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
While I like the concept for the story the execution is, to be honest, bad. Your first paragraph is nothing but two very long run-on sentences, which unfortunately are all throughout the story and can be headache-inducing. Your grammar/spelling is horrible and made reading difficult at times as I had to decipher what you meant with all the wrongly used or misspelled words. And lastly you ended the story abruptly, it felt like you just quit instead of trying to write any type of resolution for the characters. You need a good beta to check over this and help you with your spelling and sentence structures, the mistakes littered throughout this and all your other stories will drive readers away. I'm not trying to be mean, but most readers find this many errors in one story off-putting.
| samanthatm chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
| Padfootette chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
| randomplotbunny chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
That was lovely.
| didi-chan chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
very good not a lot of sex but it's just perfect :)
| NekoDae chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
The concept is interesting, though the fact that you had (extremely long) run on entrances with full stops only at the end of a paragraph really put me off before I read more than a few lines in.
| elvesknightren chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I only wish there was an omake for this :)
| Princess Ellie Hummel chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I love your mpreg!Bilbo fics; actually I love all your Hobbit?LOTR fics! I've read them all on deviant art and I am so happy I found them here! I think it is adorable hoe Frodo wanted to call Bilbo Mama!
Please write more like this soon!? :D :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
please a sequel! this is so awesome! what happened to frodo?
| jura chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
please mooooore! such a good story
| mamita chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Hello, I loved your fic, I love Bilbo, is cute and bravest of what they say, but my favorite couple is KilixBilbo, I love this couple, if were up to me there would be only this, hehe, are so cute and hot together in the movie the only one who seems to care about is Kili Bilbo, and is saved, I love these two, although the couple or the trio KilixBilboxFili FilixBilbo also I love, especially those couples, ElrondxBilbo, I also like, and although the couple I also like ThorinxBilbo or siblings compared with Durin, hopefully do more fics of them, keep it up, thank you and kisses.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
You do know how periods are supposed to be used right?
| EmerwenVoridune chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I love the concept of this story. It has a happy ending that was certainly different from most of the Thilbo stories that I have read, for which I must praise. I love the idea of Bilbo moving on with his life and doing so with Elrond. My only complaint is for the editing. I didn't always know when one sentence ended and another one began. Otherwise this was a very good story that I enjoyed.
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
| vampygurl402 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013