Reviews for and we aren't going to clean up this mess
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Wow...Just wow. This was beautiful and heart-breaking and so plausible that it makes my heart ache. Even in such a fucked up situation, they all seemed to be so perfectly in character. Amazing.
bonniereads chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Really good! Morbid and disturbing in a good way! I love reading dark stories, though. Good work!
Guest27 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I didn't know what to think when I first read this. The subject matter was disturbing. However,it was beautifully written. I actually felt sad for Marti. Even though her feelings are confusing I still like Dereck and Marti's special sibling bond.