Reviews for Monkey Business
1396 chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
I'm trying my best to not laugh right now...It's almost 2 in the morning...

I can't. I just-ohmygod.
Ixara chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Hahaha! This is so freakin' hilarious! I love how Terra became so speechless when Ventus got out of the bed! And the others' reaction when he said those words... oh man, this is such a gem! Great job!
Riilustra -Your Sweetest SIN chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Ahh, lookie at Who I found! Er.. I mean What I found! Another one of your stories! :D

OMGz! This was priceless! Absolutly, Simply AMAZING piece of Work! I just love Innocent Ven! && The last Sentence totally made me drop my phone && lit-erally almost drop it in my cup of Milk! Oh my gosh, I laughed all the way from when Terra thought wrong to the END! Mann, made me choke on my Oreo! D: But It was worth it! :D
Never. Stop. Writng.! These stories are perfect! && you can't find better ones that Can out do these only a small portion probably would though but I doubt it c:

Let's just say, I love your writing Skills! *Idea pop!* You should totally train meh! lol I shall be your Pupil, Writer Master lolol (I'm just kidding though, buttt if you wanna *wink wink* (Wha? I mean train me not-) lol)
Like Lowe's saying.. 'Never Stop Improving' lol C: (Still laughing cause of Story)
SongOfTheShadows chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
This is really good Please continue writing more stories like this.
JeIlyfish chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
HAHHA. This was great. I love how the title ties with in it too. Bwahhaaha!
SorenDevin chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Nawww! Thank you so much for that very kind mention :)
What an amazing piece of writing! It had me laughing the whole way through, and my ribs are aching so much now. You're so good at keeping them in character! Your style of writing is very clear and expressive, painting a great picture. It was a truly fantastic story, had me glues to every word and I can definitely see myself returning to this time and time again to re-read it :D
MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
LOL This is so funny! XDD I don't know who to feel bad for: Ven because he learned (or will learn) something he shouldn't, or Terra because he put himself in that situation in the first place. I'll admit though, I've never heard of that saying for...you know. XD

This was genius! I really enjoyed reading it! :D
OmegaStarShooter14 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
That was hilarious! I can totally imagine that scene happening, up to that last comment.

This was so funny! Kudos!