|Reviews for Naruto: Shinobi Institute of Performance Analysis|
| ShaiGar chapter 3 . 9/12
Goddannit, a bash fic.
| ShaiGar chapter 2 . 9/10
earth and water make wood, not mokuton. doton and suiton make mokuton. don't mix and match languages.
| Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 9/1
| TemmpestTirane chapter 20 . 8/25
lol -Naruto breaks Juriaha's nose- okay your forgiven. oh God I can't stop laughing about that. so funny. I love this story.
| Panda390 chapter 35 . 8/5
I just binged this whole story. I hope you get around to finishing the sequel.
| RinnePotter726 chapter 4 . 8/1
Wow. This fic has not aged well. I mean, the idea that Sasuke is a sociopath to begin with wasn't a very well thought out one (he's clearly not, there are numerous examples of him having both positive and negative emotions in Part 1, and even Part 2). He clearly has a psychosis about him in the second half of the series, but it's more a temporary break than full blown just being crazy. Overall it seems like you watched too much Dexter and tried to apply that to a character you're not found of.
Congratulations are in order, though, as this is one of the more popular stories on the site, but overall this plot twist is a major turnoff because it honestly is completely out of character for cannon Sasuke, to think otherwise is delusional. And I dont mean that in a "you're crazy" way, more a "your cognitive dissonance from your dislike of the character has caused you to grossly exaggerate his flaws" way. I get it is fanfiction, but the fact you seemed to have tried to rationalize it with faulty logic and character analysis at the time of writing is more of a turn off for me than just the fact that Sasuke is a sociopath in the fic. And to be clear, this isn't me being a stan for Sasuke, he's not my favorite character either. Somewhere near the bottom actually.
Anyways, it's a shame but this story just isn't to my taste. Maybe one of the works from your more recent/mature oeuvre will be. Your overall narrative, descriptive language, and mechanics are very good, which is something 95% of fics don't have, and the story certainly has found an audience that was able to enjoy it. I just feel its a shame because as popular as this has become, I think the basic idea of Team 7 being Guinea pigs for a program like this is such a novel concept that with a more realistic Sasuke this story could've become the MOST favorited story on the site by a wide margin.
| uchihasmustdie chapter 35 . 7/25
This is a review of the whole story, I really enjoyed reading this to the end. You actually had a good plot, character development, progression, etc. I'd give it at least a 4/5 for all the above. As for the negatives, I would suggest having a couple beta readers. The story has quite a few grammar and punctuation errors, either way, we are human and make mistakes so it's not much of an issue.
| Drum Bunker Dragon chapter 7 . 7/7
You've totally seen Men In Black haven't you, cuz that line was straight out of Men In Black the first movie not 2, 3, or International as far as I'm aware
| PikaMew1288 chapter 28 . 7/6
Had Naruto had access to the Rinnegan then he could have used the Rinne Rebirth Jutsu.
| PikaMew1288 chapter 11 . 7/6
Is this version of Orochimaru an idiot? Killing Naruto will greatly piss off the Akatsuki, especially when they realize that the Fox didn't reform after 9 years pass. In order to reform the fox needs both halves of his chakra.
| PikaMew1288 chapter 7 . 7/6
I wouldn't be surprised if it was the fact that Haku had a Bloodline that pissed Danzo off.
| PikaMew1288 chapter 3 . 7/6
I'm surprised that they don't have Sasuke impregnate a few women BEFORE sending him out on missions where he could possibly die.
| PikaMew1288 chapter 2 . 7/6
I wouldn't be surprised that Naruto has strong Psychical Chakra. He DOES only have Kurama's Psychical Chakra sealed inside of him after all. Kurama's Spiritual Chakra is sealed in Minato's Body.
| UzuUzuUzu chapter 5 . 7/6
And yeah Sakura having 170 is juat ridiculous
| UzuUzuUzu chapter 4 . 7/6
He also doesn't think like it which is the most important part.