Reviews for Naruto: Shinobi Institute of Performance Analysis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Adult naruto could just by using his physical ability was able to block a rasengan with his hand so I do think that his physical abilities should at least be exceptional. He is the reincarnation of asura the inheritor of yang chakra of sage of six path, is an uzumaki known for their exceptionally strong bodies and is having the yang half of the kyuubi’s chakra so I do think that you are giving him less credit than he deserves |
![]() ![]() ![]() you said in one of the previous chapters that the hokage would help naruto bring back the uzumaki clan if he's the last member why wouldn't he bring up to the council to give the last uzmaki all the benefits that the last uchiha is to recieve why wouldn't they want to repopulate the uzumakis especially with their long lifespans and only an uzumaki can hold the 9 tails |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't know what to expect going into this story, but I found it to be excellent. I really liked the chakra chain theory and Uzumaki heritage stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The characters personalities are very bland. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sasuke is shown to have good shape manipulation with the chidori in the actual Naruto series. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sociopath stuff for sasuke is just plain weird… lame |
![]() ![]() ![]() First thing first, I have to state that this is not a flame, I don't do that shit. This is my honest opinion in regards to this story. Now, some brutal honesty is due. I have only read 6 chapters so far and I am of opinion that this story should be labelled as "a chore to read through". Why? It's because most of the characters are lifeless. Up until now, the only personality I have seen is with either Naruto or Danzo, and you know you fucked up when this little bitch (Danzo) has more personality than someone like Sakura, Kakashi, Hiruzen or even Tsume. I get that our protagonists had their eyes opened due to SIPA, still it should not, in any way, kill their emotions, so much so that Danzo's seems more alive than them. I would say that your writing is good, but due to overlooking this fact you have caused the story to become stale. Only thing in the initial 6 chapters considered even remotely interesting would the SIPA procedure itself. I wouldn't recommend anyone to read this specific story. Now that all that is over and done with, I have to say you had my interest with your story "Naruto: The Gamer Files". I gave this story a chance but was left hugely disappointed. But considering this is one of your earlier stories, I will give it a pass, but I will not be reading it any further. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn if you heard that from anko |
![]() ![]() The chains should be a part of the Uzamki bloodline, not part of being a Jinjuriki. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... Are you taking artistic license with the Uzumaki chains to make them an ability given by the kyuubi or was this an indication that the tests results or conclusions based on them are not always correct? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that he doesn’t say believe it every five minutes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your story and im going to keep reading it but dexter is a psychopath if you heard somebody call him a sociopath they were wrong |
![]() ![]() ![]() there is a difference between sociopaths and psychopaths you are describing psychopaths not sociopaths i think. |