I wonder if Akatsuki will try to kidnap Gaara soon.

Orochi never learned the lesson that you shouldn't celebrate too early.

So Hisshi is still stubborn; I hope it backfire on him.

This fanfic is divided into two parts. Up to chapter 19 is a great original story with good dialogue and plot moves. After chapter 19a set of stamps and illogic.

Yeah, I think I'm gonna drop this one. The story was alright, but Fū just deciding to swear herself to a 14-year-old she just met is a bit fucking weird to me.

This was great... but a few problems...
I don't really like the concept of "ooh! Funny pervy stuff! Lol"
...
Nuh uh! I hate that! Like that moment where naruto and karin saw eachother in underwear..
If it wad actually the canon characters, naruto would've mostly just panicked, blushed and gotten out of the bathroom immediately.. OR karin would've punched him.. well.. this is an au so I didn't think much about it and moved on...
But then... with ... really, was it necessary fu to do that with Naruto... bruh..
Any ways, Harem aren't my cup of tea, that's it!

Correction; the Tailed Beasts are only about 1,000-years-old, rather than 'thousands' of years-old. ;

This is probably my favorite Crazy!Sasuke, particularly because he's not just a loose cannon but a well-honed dagger.

Enjoying story but not a fan of the Naruto/Gaara fight. Naruto is way better trained, more control of his skills and with his chains(if they can suppress Kurama…), Gaara should have been unable to relinquish control to Shukaku imo. Alls well that ends well, just not a fan of that exchange.

Peace

DB

sadness

Quite possibly my favorite Naruto fic of all time. The character interactions, the power scaling, the lack of plot armor (Hebi-teme getting that Gojo treatment, Pain losing several of his paths without making a huge deal out of it, Gaara losing a hand), the Uzumaki Ramen worship, not randomly making everyone less powerful for no reason (Sakura, Karin, Tenten are all powerful in their own rights), Naruto obtaining the Uzumaki Chains but not being immediately godlike at using them...
This feels like I'm accompanying Naruto on his journey.

Very entertaining!

Think you accidentally said that Hinata’s taijutsu potential is moderate. I say accidentally, because you also say that a strong potential career path for Hinata is taijutsu.

Good god the Sasuke hate/ basing/ whatever this is go crazy. This kinda goes directly again Naruto lore too cuz the Uchiha are meant to love fiercely which is then turned to hate. Sasuke whole journey is embracing the love people give him and leave behind the hate that surrounds him. Making him a sociopath just completely ruins his character and no licenses psychologist is ever ever going to talk to a patient like that.

The idea is very interesting and the execution is solid but it has its bad moments where the author clearly does something childishly dumb while thinking it is 'cool'. Unfortunately, his idea of 'cool' is on the level of a teenager.

My main question is what the hell is Raipurusu no Jutsu supposed to be? I have found no references to it anywhere online except this story, so why didn't you just use a jutsu name in the same language as the rest of your story?