Reviews for Naruto: Shinobi Institute of Performance Analysis
Dancert chapter 34 . 9/27
I really like your story. I hope you will keep writing stuff ️
federermod chapter 34 . 9/7
One of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read but I have to say the ending didn't make sense to me. I don't see why Tobi would care enough about Iwa to have Pein crush it. Kohona or even Mist seems like more logical targets. Especially with so many powerful Konoha nin not in the village. And it just kinda turned into too much of a game with the kage summit. I would have liked to see Akatsuki picked off one by one. Akatsuki is not this invincible thing. Their plans were actually relatively fragile. Both Pein and Tobi can be beaten. It's only the true Madara who's pretty invincible. At some point Zetsu would likely give up on his current attempt and try again later. But remember how long it took to get a rinnegan and manipulate the villages.
Rpg chapter 3 . 8/29
"That's correct, and in this case he mostly feels rage, anger, hatred, and a strong desire to kill," explained Saiga.

There is also fear and whatever he felt to naruto during wave arc (i wonder what this eldritch abomination of a emotion is)

Or him for some reason refusing to kill naruto after the final clash at p1 vote

And yes aliens are genetically insane because otherwise black zetsu wouldn't think that itachi is completely invincible despite the fact that he has all of kaguya's knowledge as her will and should have saw indra, ashura, madara, hashirama anyway

And if you say they were too smart to inbred then let me tell you that they add all genetic sequences and their combinations that have ever appeared on any planet in any planets history regardless if original owner of that genetic sequence died in literally another dimension before god tree was ever implanted

Though all of this can actually be boiled (at least the alien gene part) to boruto and end of shippuden to lesser degree while everything else can be handwaved

I also right now realized that uchiha insanity is caused by alien(sharingan) genetics or at least sharingan's logical consequences and alien insanity can be chalked up to them being literal abominations
Rpg chapter 4 . 8/29
Really? You think sasuke who unconsciously decided in wave arc to sacrifice his life is a psychopath?

Do you think that you have actually described psychopathy well?

Sasuke's clearly insane but not a psychopath.

And uchiha inbreeding weakening sharingan like not doing it would actually gradually strenghten it back to indra levels (alien genetics don't work like that because if they worked as you said then younger son and his descendants would have sharingan or rather eternal mangekyou rinne-sharingan, the same with hyuga) passing on uchiha sharingan genetics is basically luck and the best way to inecrase preserved amount of alien sharingan dna without genetic enginerring is literally breeding with as many people as possible every generationluck inevitably people who are indra's descendants breeding with other people who are indra's descendants if they aren't lucky enough to have all descendants inherit all alien genetics until as many people as possible has as complete as possible alien genetics set (you are still likely to lose some of the genetics that can be hypothetically restored only by pure mutation luck aka humans evolving into otsutsuki direction) sharingan is not super saiyan in terms of genetics which is quality that seems to be actually amplified on top of being seemingly always passed on

Alienhuman50/50alien-human hybrid

50/50alien-human hybridhuman0-50/50-100 alien-human hybrid (based on "luck")

6%alien6%alien (5.7 out of 6 overlaps)0-6.3%alien ( possible alien duplicates that were not originally present)

6% alienhuman 0-6%alien (no inbredding)

85%alien50%alien(35%overlap)35-100%alien

70%alien70%alien(60% overlap)20-80%alien

25%alien75%alien(no overlap)0-100%alien

By alien i mean of one specific one and not entire race

Aka genetics are more complitated (especially when you include a different species like an alien)

Do all otsutsuki because of their genetic "psychopathy" deserve to die
alefrosier chapter 5 . 6/1
I don't think Sasuke is a sociopath, first of all it was shown in more than one scene that he feels empathy even after training with Orochimaru, on top of training with Orochimaru Sasuke never killed, he said the only life he would take It would be Itachi's after defeating a thousand people who were clearly not ninjas, not that he doesn't have problems but nothing serial killer level, I think Naruto has more psychological problems than Sasuke, starting with Naruto's mind escape which is a sewer.
Uncle Dork chapter 1 . 5/27
Ayo, did someone say time to re-read the whole fic?
Maylon chapter 22 . 5/22
A Sannin, someone with multiple personality disorder, and a medic nin who can heal cell structure VS A Sannin with Sage Mode, a Hatake with a Sharingan and many summons every copyable jutsu he's ever seen, and the Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi, who is also the son of the fourth Hokage, and an Uzumaki, with Chakra chains, Probably sage mode.

wonder who wins
Valanz-Del'gronto-Espada-neg'1 chapter 19 . 5/8
Oh… OH…OOOOH SWEET LORDS OF ALL! DUMBLEDORE WAS AN UZUMAKI!
Valanz-Del'gronto-Espada-neg'1 chapter 13 . 5/8
She’s gonna fight like an Orochi From For Honor without the Blade
Write Your Wrongs chapter 12 . 5/7
FINALLY! A good Tenten vs Temari rehash that gives Tenten-chan a clear, convincing victory! Well done!
Write Your Wrongs chapter 3 . 5/6
Ooo I like this Uchiha scene
johnstonrichard3 chapter 2 . 4/16
Okay this was pretty good until I got to the Sasuke chapter if you're going to make a bashing fic can you give a little warning? I have to point out that being a sociopath does not make you violent or murderous and that the majority of Serial killer ls are psychopaths who lack empathy not sociopaths who have difficulty with emotions in general, at least do a little research into these things before you go throwing around words you don't understand, hell just by how you have the doctor talk to Sasuke she is legitimately more unhinged than him and would be more likely to be a threat to society.
xXSilenceXx chapter 34 . 4/15
I was a little put of by Sasuke’s condition at first, mostly because he wasn’t really crazy until Orochimaru got to him, but I see what your building up to now. Thank you for writing this, it was really great!
Lunkan chapter 35 . 4/7
First off great story thank you.

Second, what's up with the amount of "akshually" in the reviews? This is a fanfiction people so what if some things are not like in canon? That is the point of fanfics.
my 2 guys chapter 35 . 3/24
that was great
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