Reviews for Naruto: Shinobi Institute of Performance Analysis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t think Naruto should want to be hokage after some serious consideration. He thinks it over for the next few years before deciding no I don’t want to be hokage. I only wanted to be acknowledged. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT IS ACTUALLY WRONG WITH YOUUUUUU? YOU CANT START A CHAPTER LIKE THAT! ESPECIALLY IF ITS NOT REAL LOVE THIS BTW |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT IS ACTUALLY WRONG WITH YOUUUUUU? YOU CANT START A CHAPTER LIKE THAT! ESPECIALLY IF ITS NOT REAL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() i really hope he fucks the brains out of samui and mabui in next chap. or claim one of them |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope snakey and kabuto dies in the invasion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck the forehead sakura bitch. Though i would have appreciated if Naruto was told the reason of sakura's change was her mother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In pure lover with your work. Great effort, i can see the hardwork and determination you put in it. Great character description. Thanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the concept. Let Naruto FLY, spread his wings... Hell yeah |
![]() ![]() ![]() these tests are very boring |
![]() ![]() ![]() first thoughts are that this fic seems more like a rushed conversation than an actual story. little to no environmental description, "flavor text", or creative word choice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll be honest i should have expected this, but i didnt. I looked at the "sequel" and fuck you very much for saying this was abandoned. Wait, you didnt. Nevermind. Im sorry but im frustrated. A good fic like this didnt deserve to petter out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a misleading title. It should have been called : "What happens when Naruto characters arent utter cunts". |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea of Sasuke being a sociopath. Obviously having the person you most trust kill your whole family fucks you up in the head. I also love the story so far even though I haven't read the whole thing yet. |
![]() ![]() That is not how sociopathy works. First off, as far as we can tell, sociopathy cannot be diagnosed via brain scan. Second, you cannot diagnose someone below the age of eighteen as a sociopath. The first is because there is nothing special about brain activity or structure in sociopaths(the actual disorder is called anti-social personality disorder) . And the second is because in children and teenagers the frontal cortex is not fully developed. Thus, all children show signs of sociopathy(a lack of long term consequence analysis, social que and empathy issues, manipulative behavior, etc.). Two final issues with your presentation of sociopathy, sociopaths feel a lot more than just anger, and brain activity is never that clean cut. Outside of that, I think the base idea for the story is interesting. |