Reviews for Naruto: Shinobi Institute of Performance Analysis
Cookie Montser chapter 1 . 3/1/2017
Just started reading this. Looks like a great start. Going to get some popcorn.
Nitmi chapter 31 . 2/18/2017
I really want to praise this story, but the internalized mysogynistic layer over all the actions given to the characters is really unconfortable to read.

Pura Vida.
Nitmi chapter 29 . 2/17/2017
Fuu creep me out. Really doesnt behave like a human being.

Like the story otherwise.
blhuez chapter 7 . 2/16/2017
WOW! Finally! A real shinobi village. One which Hiruzen isn't painted as wimp. Seriously, that guy survived 3 Great Shinobi Wars and was portrayed as easily maniputed wimp.
sistercity chapter 13 . 2/5/2017
Chapter 13, Hinata's soft style - the thought occurred to me 'Float like a butterfly, Sting like a bee'. Appropriate for her, yes?
Darkfiretiger chapter 22 . 1/11/2017
"Kakashi is never the emissary."
I love this line, always makes me chuckle.
arsenicminds chapter 14 . 12/28/2016
I completely fell in love with your explanation of the Uzumaki Chains
Amon Kashino chapter 35 . 12/25/2016
Had me at first but it felt like it was droning on in parts and drew my attention away from the story and it's plot but it was good for the most part not reading the sequel though
wulf seeker chapter 6 . 12/17/2016
a Kunai to the knee
Hn chapter 3 . 12/12/2016
Why does sasuke have to be the bad guy here
I mean really
I feel you got the personality wrong very wrong
Maximum Over-Saiyan chapter 3 . 12/10/2016
While Sasuke has never been my favorite character (in fact, I think he's the source of a lot of the series shortcomings), I don't think he was quite as psychotic as you suggest. At least, not at this point in the series. The Sasuke you're writing more resembles the 16-year old version after he kills Itachi, not the aloof genin we were introduced to.
jinsoju chapter 12 . 11/19/2016
Every shinobi in Kohana is required to learn Kokuangyo no jutsu lest you suffer brain aneurysm.
jinsoju chapter 6 . 11/19/2016
He took an kunai to the knee and he's still a ninja? wow he's made of tougher stuff than that other wimp on the bridge.
Oddballzebra chapter 28 . 11/1/2016
What about Kurama's Yin half?
Oddballzebra chapter 27 . 11/1/2016
Are you seriously just going to let him believe it was just a dream? Also, why the hell does he keep fainting?
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