Just started reading this. Looks like a great start. Going to get some popcorn.

I really want to praise this story, but the internalized mysogynistic layer over all the actions given to the characters is really unconfortable to read.

Pura Vida.

Fuu creep me out. Really doesnt behave like a human being.

Like the story otherwise.

WOW! Finally! A real shinobi village. One which Hiruzen isn't painted as wimp. Seriously, that guy survived 3 Great Shinobi Wars and was portrayed as easily maniputed wimp.

Chapter 13, Hinata's soft style - the thought occurred to me 'Float like a butterfly, Sting like a bee'. Appropriate for her, yes?

"Kakashi is never the emissary."
I love this line, always makes me chuckle.

I completely fell in love with your explanation of the Uzumaki Chains

Had me at first but it felt like it was droning on in parts and drew my attention away from the story and it's plot but it was good for the most part not reading the sequel though

a Kunai to the knee

Why does sasuke have to be the bad guy here
I mean really
I feel you got the personality wrong very wrong

While Sasuke has never been my favorite character (in fact, I think he's the source of a lot of the series shortcomings), I don't think he was quite as psychotic as you suggest. At least, not at this point in the series. The Sasuke you're writing more resembles the 16-year old version after he kills Itachi, not the aloof genin we were introduced to.

Every shinobi in Kohana is required to learn Kokuangyo no jutsu lest you suffer brain aneurysm.

He took an kunai to the knee and he's still a ninja? wow he's made of tougher stuff than that other wimp on the bridge.

What about Kurama's Yin half?

Are you seriously just going to let him believe it was just a dream? Also, why the hell does he keep fainting?