|Reviews for Mayday Parker, Spider Girl|
| Victorsmyname chapter 29 . 1/15
Wow. This felt like a movie! In fact, you should pitch this to be a movie or at least a sold book. I know it seems that I am milking it but this really was good. Wait... is there a sequel?! See you when I finish that one!
(Seriously though, you did good with this story. It had ups and downs. The only flaws I saw was that for the first half of the story Mayday's character felt kind of one dimensional. But towards the end, her personality was more fleshed out and I appreciate that. :))
| minimateking30 chapter 28 . 11/20/2016
This story is fantastic! Great work.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
Why isn't this in theaters. You so have got to call Hollywood to make this movie
| Guest chapter 29 . 3/17/2015
Honestly I found this by pure accident I accidentally clicked on it and I started reading and could not stop and im so happy I did I loved it 100% id read it over and over.
| Spider-GirlFanboy616 chapter 29 . 2/4/2015
I loved this whole thing. I got so worked up when it kept seeming Black Widow came back from the . I didn't think she was going to find her dad. I thought it was going to be and Amazing Spiderman type thing where he doesn't figure it out immediately. I'm also happy Harry didn't turn completely bad like in Spiderman 3. I was also shocked to see that Ms. Garcia was with Norman Osborn. Just an amazing story in all. Get it...Amazing? Haha
| nekochan1994 chapter 24 . 12/9/2014
I was actually expecting Mayday to drag her down too.
| nekochan1994 chapter 13 . 12/9/2014
She really needs to tell her mother all of this.
| nekochan1994 chapter 11 . 12/9/2014
Did they just have that argument in front of Ben? Why didn't he say anything? He'd make a comment to his dad being a superhero.
| nekochan1994 chapter 8 . 12/8/2014
Are Harry and Mayday going to be a couple?
| nekochan1994 chapter 7 . 12/8/2014
Wouldn't May have said, "You think he's dead?!" Because her mother just stated that she believes he's dead.
| nekochan1994 chapter 5 . 12/8/2014
Doesn't she realize that her mother will immediately know its her? Especially since she's using her dad's costume.
| nekochan1994 chapter 4 . 12/8/2014
Why did she feel that she needed to follow her father's footsteps?
| nekochan1994 chapter 3 . 12/8/2014
1.) why would she regret being told?
2.) she just left her backpack at school
3.) why isn't Mary Jane interrogating her more about why she skipped school?
| nekochan1994 chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
That's going to be a bitch to explain away
| nekochan1994 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Why is Harry Mayday's age? How come you didn't use Norman Jr.?