|Reviews for Club Eclipse Part II (Updated)|
| debslmac chapter 1 . 2/19
| Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 1/28
Thought it was Garrett.
So glad they worked through the separation.
Who would have thought Tanya pulling through like she did.
| maphie chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
I enjoyed that bit! But again I think the pacing of these stories will be greatly improved by drawing out the characters a bit more. For example, if Tanya was going to end up being a nice person, maybe a few more chapters to explore her character would help us understand her behavior and motivations. It was such a huge leap between her "tell her to go back from where she came" statement to "I'm going to hop on a flight from London to Seattle to find Edward's girlfriend to apologize to her and maybe mend things between her and Edward". In fact, I would think that a chance but civil encounter between Tanya and Edward to provide closure and to help Edward put his relationship with Bella in perspective might be effective here. Something along the lines of "he realized that never forgiving Tanya or even wanting to make it work told him that he was never that vested in their relationship." Yes, definitely multi-chap. Thanks for keeping me company this weekend. :-)
| Mistydeb chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
So glad they caught garrett before he did any real damage. I laughed at the way Edward got ahead of himself with the email account and credit card...so funny. Onto the final installment, Debbie
| Jessifer79 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
come on now we need a part 3 pppllleeeaaassseee!
| ParasiteGoddess chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really liked this and am glad Bella and Edward got their ending :)
| Schlager G chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Great ending to a great story! Thank you!
| angela.hayesmitchell chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Is Garrett the english guy that showed up to Bellas apartment? Honestly men could really learn a thing or two about pleasuring a women from Edward lol ;-D My guess is Paul is the one taking the pictures.