|Reviews for Scream|
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/12
Lolz "blow up the flat", nice
| Max Crimson chapter 17 . 7/14/2015
Well. I've never really been one for John X Moriarty, but I couldn't help but fangirl with this! XD This was amazing! I loved the way you wrote them, I just, I can't put it into words how much I loved this. I'm going to head over to the sequal. I expect great things with that. XD
GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
| catspats31 chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
The writing quality is fine, but you must note this part of the Content guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
Please remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature from this story if you want it on this site. Try to upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is welcomed like AdultFanfiction or Archive Of Our Own.
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| Phoenix Noir chapter 16 . 11/25/2014
AHHHH, I LOVED IT SO MUCH
| Phoenix Noir chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
This is so fantastic that I don't really have words. I will give you baked goods, instead.
| ImpressedReader chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
My favorite part: "...abs and hips bones that would make Greek statues jealous..."
That part made me laugh! :)
| DracyGiuliana chapter 16 . 10/8/2014
Soo! I really really loved this! I laughed, I cried and I fangirled myself to pieces.
You wrote the best reactions to Johniarty EVER. Loved all four, Mycroft's, Greg's, Sherlock's and Martha's. They were utterly hilarious! This whole thing was utterly hilarious!
I love how BAMF John is in this one, he's amazing. And how could I ever not love Jimmy? Awesome! And I really really really love the you used with Jimmy's speech, it really helps your imagination!
I also love love loove the Deadly Dozen! That whole conversation in chapter 11 about shipping cracked me up so much! As did all your random Hobbit references! Honestly, the DD are so adorable and hilarious while totally badass.. they are AWESOME! My absolute favorite is Jezebel, she is just the PERFECT fangirl and she is amazing.
I really really really loved this fanfic. This is one of them diamonds you find in the deep dark pit of fanfictionland. Keep being awesome!
| Hamster Day ss chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
I want to convert this fanfic for Russian users. Can I get your permission?
| I. C. Thestrals chapter 13 . 5/25/2014
I am enjoying this story, I really like the dynamic between Jim and John, especially when Jim was getting relationship advice. It was lovely to be reminded of his cannon nature. Also I'm impressed with your writing style, similar styles have only previously been boring... The dozen are odd, I don't think theyd be as shippy as you're making them, but as I just said: you're making them. Your choice. Thanks for writing.
This is a separate request from this story: are you also of the potterhead fandom? If so could you possibly write something about Moriarty and Bellatrix? One shot, chaptered, anything? I'd love to read it, but it's not out there. Thanks.
| Lexisfightingrobots chapter 13 . 4/28/2014
Damn. Thays cute.
| Lexisfightingrobots chapter 10 . 4/28/2014
jIM, YOU wANKER!1!
| Convenient Alias chapter 16 . 3/12/2014
Well, I'm hoping Sherlock just kind of decided to come along for the honeymoon, that he didn't just come to drag John off to some crime scene because it was boring without him.
...But that's a bit unrealistic.
Awesome story! It was very heartwarming for something named "Scream."
| The Green Eyed Cat chapter 16 . 2/17/2014
Ok I actually get down on my knees and beg you for a sequel; please, please, pretty please? I've loved this fic so much and you've written them all so well. I adore the interaction between John, Jim and Sherlock - especially when they're all getting along. This fic is absolutely amazing and you should be very proud of it.
| xxXstephanieXxx chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
Please do a sequel i LOVE this story! :)
| Joy chapter 16 . 1/26/2014
I love you! this is the most fantastic, heartwarming, sexy, funny fanfiction that I have read in a long long time. your characterisation is realistic, your ability to create insults that sherlock would actually say is uncanny (I don't think I will ever forget the one Anderson being the perfect example of why some species eat their young at birth) and the whole thing was brilliant! Thank you.