Markosgirl69 chapter 5 . 12/14/2017
plplzplz update? I love this story soo much! I need more Major in my life
Babysis64 chapter 5 . 12/10/2017
oh my this was a good chapter as well. I hope that everything is going to be alright. So Jasper feels the apart from his true mate already wow different and very interesting. I wonder if they will explain it to Bella about mates and everything else right.
Babysis64 chapter 4 . 12/10/2017
wow I thought Bella locked the door behind herself so they broke into her house then. I could imagine being caught in just my underwear right.
Babysis64 chapter 3 . 12/10/2017
good chapter so I wonder why the major makes him self known to the coven a lot of times. This is good though that he won't put up with crap especially from Rosalie right.
Babysis64 chapter 2 . 12/10/2017
this was interesting. Wow Bella sure is clumsy huh. Glad her dad didn't laugh where he saw her at the bottom of the stairs right.
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
wow this was a interesting prologue, thank you for sharing this.
scarlson31 chapter 5 . 4/21/2017
More, please?
ElijahJessGodric chapter 5 . 11/21/2015
I know you haven't updated in years now but I still hope you will
Apelly chapter 5 . 10/26/2015
I absolutely love your story and hope you keep writing.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2015
Awesome freaking story can't stop laughing. Ty so much sharing I do hope that you complete this story. Ty AGAIN FOR SHARING YOUR WRITING TALENT.
LadyNorth76 chapter 5 . 10/11/2015
I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
nikolasowa chapter 5 . 8/8/2015
Please update! ! ! ! ! !
NatalieLynn chapter 5 . 7/8/2015
Great chapter!
01Katie chapter 5 . 6/17/2015
Love it please update ASAFP.
neecy4life chapter 5 . 6/16/2015
Finally wait for an update
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