Reviews for Beaten and Broken
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 9 . 5/12
You're twelve and I think you'll someday be a published author!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 8 . 5/12
I'm not sure what just happened and I'm sure it had a purpose but I found it quite confusing!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 7 . 5/12
It seems Bella and Selena are both safe and being cared for by the Cullen's!

Bella's flashbacks are worse than a horror movie!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 6 . 5/12
WOW! I don't have a clue Bella not only survived but seems to be an excellent student and a kind, compassionate as well as a person of sound morals!

How horrible for Bella and her Mother! It's tragic!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 5 . 5/12
Not one but two young girls are beaten and abused in front of the school and no authority figure does anything o help0 them! It's a horrific Chapter!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 4 . 5/12
Oh, my God, how horrible, painful and scary the end of the tour was for Bella! I think Charlie Swan is completely insane!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 3 . 5/12
Is beating and raping Bella going to be a daily issue?

I hate the cutting! I hope Bella's right and today something amazing will happen to Bella and maybe Selena, too!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 2 . 5/12
She's beaten and broken down yet, she can write about it with all her heart soul!

I hope she doesn't self harm or kill herself! I think she's close!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 1 . 5/12
Bella is robotic and she's shut down her emotions! I think her treatment by her sperm donor is horrific!

Selena is suffering the same way but at this pint she's not in horrible shape like Bella!

I think, given the subject matter of this chapter, you handled it beautifully!
mizskitles220 chapter 12 . 1/2
Beaten and Broke! Please!
cathy29jes chapter 12 . 1/2
hello,
I vote for this story and the other two Jella,
Cathy
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22/2013
a bientot
GONE0101010101 chapter 8 . 7/13/2013
Call me a little screwed up, but I'm loving your plot.
There is just something about abuse and vampires haha, just gets you!
Keep writing!
sexymama25 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
interesting story
Guest chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
Will you write more for this story please thanks D
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