Reviews for Because of His Onyx Eyes
Angelina786 chapter 53 . 12/29/2014
I luv your story
Great job
Luv the title, reflects all the handwork you put into this
I luved it so much I read 53 chapters in one day and like right know it is 1:21 a.m
Guest chapter 11 . 11/1/2014
Please make vegeta stop calling bulma onna it is so irritating damn it!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 10 . 10/17/2014
God, tell her already (that you didn't destroy Earth)!
LadyBardock chapter 52 . 9/29/2014
Nice story :)
Crescent Queen chapter 52 . 6/23/2014
Great fanfiction! Second time I read it and it's still one of the best I've ever seen. And YES I know what it feels like to want to squeeze a baby to death, I thought I was crazy though LOL :)
smothchap chapter 53 . 6/21/2014
Great story!
Clementinapetrick chapter 46 . 5/11/2014
this chapter is perfect for me. because I thought that Vegeta was not going to be there. you are awesome
Nella chapter 5 . 1/21/2014
I usually give a story 5 chapters to get me interrested. Well, I think its a bit too fluffy for me. The characters are too fickle for their age (Bulma especially) and Bulma didn't know Goku when she was 6. I like the concept of it tho. I just wish your character interactions were believable
rennysusanto chapter 53 . 11/26/2013
Love it!
deddie123 chapter 53 . 11/26/2013
This was a fascinating story I loved it from beginning to end I would also love to read your follow up story keep up the good work !
Dragon ball 1 chapter 22 . 10/25/2013
This story is the best! Hurry up with the next chappie!
tink82 chapter 52 . 10/8/2013
that was pretty awesome
Ares lover chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Lol I love the dialogue between you and vegeta! I want more author/character dialogue. Perhaps another idea for a new book?
Ares lover chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
Oh wait nvm it's not poetry
Ares lover chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Oh it's poetry...you should've put it in the poetry genre
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