Reviews for Because of His Onyx Eyes
Inkenkiuny22 chapter 53 . 5/27
I hope and wait anxiously for the sequel... To be honest the first fanfic I ever red was about Vegeta and Bulman I didn't know fanfic exist... I love it so much... It had everything drama, romance, comedy, suspense, action, etc. Over the year I had red many other fanfic which I had like and some of the love but not as much as I love my first one until now... Thank for give it to me again the reason why I start to read fanfic and love them that was a great story... Keep up the good work
Inkenkiuny22 chapter 1 . 5/27
Love it all of it... Keep up the good work
hayabusa girl chapter 53 . 5/12
Well... took me awhile To finish but i did i liked thanks for making it
Guest chapter 6 . 4/12
I don't think vegeta would be nearly strong enough to beat Hokusai after just becoming a super saiyan
smar0403 chapter 53 . 3/27
This is one of the best B/V stories did you ever write a sequel?
Guest chapter 53 . 12/9/2015
Sequel?
xFlipJamsx chapter 53 . 10/4/2015
please write a sequel for this story
Guest chapter 53 . 7/26/2015
I just realised you haven't made the sequel that is not cool man :/
Guest chapter 53 . 7/26/2015
Oh no :( vegeta ruling the universe :( was this bulmas Storm thing ? :( I hope everything is well with them
Guest chapter 4 . 7/25/2015
I hope bulma and vegeta hook up I don't like Yamaha he's not good enough for bulma.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
This is one of my favorite B/V fanfictions... I hope you write a sequel to it
Sheri Vegas chapter 10 . 4/8/2015
So I stopped here. It just seems so unrealistic that Bulma would completely forget that Vegeta had "annihilated" Earth and killed all her family and friends. Like she just doesn't care or bring it up. And the conversation between her and the king is just way too casual. Maybe, one day I'll come back to this, but this was the most I could read due to loss of interest. Also, your little author notes randomly in the chapters are distracting and kill the vibe. And don't even get me started on the random OOC thoughts. Good try though. :)
Angelina786 chapter 53 . 12/29/2014
I luv your story
Great job
Luv the title, reflects all the handwork you put into this
I luved it so much I read 53 chapters in one day and like right know it is 1:21 a.m
Guest chapter 11 . 11/1/2014
Please make vegeta stop calling bulma onna it is so irritating damn it!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 10 . 10/17/2014
God, tell her already (that you didn't destroy Earth)!
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