Reviews for Bite Club
staceleo chapter 57 . 7/21/2013
Oh my god!

Awesome and I heart you so much!
reds-red chapter 56 . 7/14/2013
"Masen whirls back and lets his fist fly a million miles an hour before it grinds into my face. The gun clatters across the floor and, through the ringing milky way inside my skull, I can hear him laughing. He sinks a solid fist into my stomach and I collapse on the concrete with a wet smack."

"Because you're mine, don't you fucking get that?" Masen snaps at me, teeth flashing. "A little fucking piece of a greater whole. You're just every meaningless part of my humanity, all smashed up together and tossed out into the world." He stalks around me as I groan and try to roll over, my insides gone liquid. "I was sick of feeling that shit, so I let you go."

The visual acuity of your words is always so creatively amazing.
4MeJasper chapter 56 . 7/14/2013's out there!
"So just fucking kill me!" I shout at the concrete and glance around for the gun. It glitters from a dark corner, light years away. Masen rolls his eyes and straightens his jacket.

"It wouldn't do me much good to off myself, now would it?"
mdsngrc chapter 56 . 7/14/2013
Better and better! :D
staceleo chapter 56 . 7/14/2013
This vacation has been shit and I needed this!

Thank you, my darling and talented friend!
Maplestyle chapter 56 . 7/14/2013
Poor deluded Edward!
MagTwi78 chapter 56 . 7/14/2013
I am the worst reviewer, but I snatch up every snippet of this as it comes. xx
mdsngrc chapter 55 . 7/9/2013
Oh snap! I love this story so much!
staceleo chapter 55 . 7/8/2013

Love it and more please!
staceleo chapter 54 . 7/8/2013
What the what?!

Love it!
Rita01tx chapter 55 . 7/8/2013
LMAO! Yeah, that would be a damn fine reason!
Rita01tx chapter 54 . 7/8/2013
Oooh! Have we come full circle on the whole blowin' up the house incident?
modernsafari chapter 55 . 7/8/2013
Love this story! It's trippy and perfectly written and I can't get enough! ;)
4MeJasper chapter 55 . 7/8/2013
Oops! He blew up the house (again!)
4MeJasper chapter 54 . 7/8/2013
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