|Reviews for A Simple Matter of Mechanics|
| Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
I love this pairing, first off. Secondly, this was well-written and deliciously smutty in my opinion. I thought it was absolutely wonderful.
| C0ldSteel chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
I believe the cliche is "vim and vigor" not "vim and vinegar."
While Fonzie is a hood, he still considers himself a gentleman. He holds doors and seats ladies and sticks up for the underdog. If anyone can be both, he can.
Yeah, this was some pretty gratuitous smut, a little annoying here and there (cum instead of come is really childish in my opinion, but it's par for the course when I delve into this corner of fanfic) but it had a weird cuteness to it, even though I can't see the Fonz going for anything that doesn't have a big rack. I guess if these two ever did go gay, it might happen sort of like this. And of course the opening and closing lines have a predictable, cheesy ring to them... which is not a negative thing imo. I like cheese way too much, or I probably wouldn't bother to review. Ever. And I don't think predictability is always a bad thing. Sometimes when you know what's coming, it would seem wrong if something else came instead.
So. This is one of the few HD stories I've managed to read through and I enjoyed it. Coming from someone as picky as I am, that's high praise. ;)
| Chris chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Nicely done, with good descriptions of the sex. The only thing which could have made it more exciting for me would be the inclusion of Chachi - I'm sure Fonzie loves him too!
| wally's girlfriend chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Q wQ oh my! Such perfection! I love how you got into Fonzie's mind, and and this is just pure perfection! I really enjoyed reading it! uwu
| Archem chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Bravo! That was amazing. You deserve an award. I really, really loved this story. It was equally sexy and meaningful.
| MAFITA chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Absolutely adored it! It's the first time I ever read a slash fic for Happy Days, (or any Happy Days fic, anyway) and I'm glad that I did! Now I'm in the Fonzie/Ritchie bandwagon... XD Once again, my friend, you demonstrated that you're an awsome writer! :) Can't wait to read more of your fics in the future... *hint* Hope it will be soon! *second hint* Kisses!
| TheNextOfKin chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
| delia cerrano chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Wow! How shocking...surprising...fun, even maybe makes sense since Fonzie always seemed to be pushing to be seen as the be all-end all super masculine male sex god to all women. Perhaps he protested his maleness too much.
| WiseDraco chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Oh ...that was so sweet. I especially liked the line "It's the funniest unfunny thing ..." Very nicely done! I don't really watch Happy Days but when you said you posted something new I wanted to check it out.
I'm glad I did.
| Gadhar chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I love being suggestive at times- this is one of them. 'Cause wow, I love this!
It works so well, because of the conflict Fonz is having. And then all the contrast between Richie and girls. And just the beginning especially- beautifully written. Talking about Fonz and his motorcycle, talking about the things he loves, that he's good at it. And then this thing with Richie. It's like Fonz is simple you know and then throw him in this situation and things are not so simple but he's not against it either.
It's really cool to see the way the roles are switched. Generally Richie is the one unsure and Fonz is the one knowing what he's doing, but that's not the case this time and that's good. The very rarely seen vulnerable side of Fonz.
I also like how the laat sentence is the first one but slightly changed, a cool way to bring it to a close.
My favorite paragraph-or at least one of them. The descriptions are just awesome
" No, Fonzie loves the feel of a carburetor - oil slicked and heavy - in his hands. Loves the way he can coax an engine to life with a touch of his fingertips. He loves the way his motorcycle responds, thrumming, like a lover, to his touch - rousing herself when he flicks his wrist to rev the engine. Vibrations reverberate through his body, and her sound drowns out everything else, breaking the world down to its bare bones. It's just him and her and an open road to ride."
By the way "Lovin' Touchin', Squeezin'" by Journey is a good song to listen to while reading this. It fits, oddly.